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Kenzi_NN_Fizzy

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Jul 29, 2012
 
CHAPTER-1 The reunion

i was with my boyfriend Niall Horan from one direction!!! we were waiting for the rest of the lads to get here so i could see them again!! i have not seen them all year as they were on tour. they finally showed up my bffs got really exited!! as i ran to hug the boys they screamed my name Zayn yelled , "Kenzi Oh My Mirror you have grown to be as tall as Niall now!!!!!" "she used to be shorter than me" Niall said to my friends. they giggled. Louis screams in my ear "Oh My Carrots i havent seen you for along time girl dang you have grown...... WANT A CARROT?!?!?!" i said yes and accepted his gift. Harry walks over and looks at me. I say "What??" he replied with "Niall is lucky." Niall looked at him and said "What did you say to my girl??" he tackled harry!!! harry was yelling and they started to wrestle!! we all BUSTED out laughing!!!! thrn liam goes "Where is Daddy Direction's hug??" so i huged him and he smiled!!
Finally everything settled down and we all sat down at the backyard table.
I said, "Im sorry let me introduce you guys to each other!!" i sat with my hand inter locked with Niall's.
I told everyone i was going to introduce my best friends to the boys and say my fave thing about them, they agreed that would be how i introduced them!!

Guys so um that was the first chapter so lets try for 2 comments for me to continue
-Fizzy
Jennifer Tomlinson

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Jul 29, 2012
 
Luv it! Do u need gfs? If u do can I have Louis? If u already do have them it's ok. Pls continue :)
Kenzi_NN_Fizzy

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Jul 29, 2012
 
Jennifer Tomlinson wrote:
Luv it! Do u need gfs? If u do can I have Louis? If u already do have them it's ok. Pls continue :)
no but do you want to be louis cousins gf he comes in later???!!!!! in chapter 3 or 4
Lauren

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#4
Jul 29, 2012
 
Sooooooooo good... Can i be in it?! Idm i will still read :p
Kenzi_NN_Fizzy

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Jul 29, 2012
 
Lauren wrote:
Sooooooooo good... Can i be in it?! Idm i will still read :p
yea i have 4 parts open right now
Mean girl leader:
Meangirl 1:
Meangirl 2:
Meangirl 3:
Meangirl 4;
NOT 4 PARTS I MENT SIX BUT WASNT PAYING ATTENTION WHEN I TYPED IT
Louis bff:
and if you have anymore characters you think i should put in i will and you can even create a new character and ill put u in as that character
Kenzi_NN_Fizzy

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#6
Jul 29, 2012
 
im writing more right now guys!!!!
Lauren

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#7
Jul 29, 2012
 
Ill be Louis bff is that okay?
Kenzi_NN_Fizzy

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#8
Jul 29, 2012
 
yes very ok (:
Lauren

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Jul 29, 2012
 
My friends katrelle, Billie and Pheboe (they are sleepin over) say they will be some of the mean girls :p if thats okay with u
Kenzi_NN_Fizzy

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Jul 29, 2012
 
perfectly fine!!!
Lauren

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#11
Jul 29, 2012
 
Well u should write more!!!!:) im getting exicted
Kenzi_NN_Fizzy

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Jul 29, 2012
 
CHAPTER 2- 5 GIRLS 5 BOYS

I said , "You guys... this is Jordon!!! She is the sweetest and most down ro earth girl ever!!!"
"Dont forget responsible!!" she chimed in
She glanced at Liam he started to blush, he smiled at her she turned red as a cherry!! Liam thought it was cute, so he asked her for her number she entered it in his phone and they started texting away!! i then got to Emily, i said guys this is emily, and she is fun to be around and loves 1D!!!!!"
Zayn looked at her and started to speek he said, "Wow, you are compleatly Beauti-" He was cut off by Jordans crying..... "LIAM" i yelled at him "What did i do??" he yelled back!! "Why is my BFF crying?" i asked "Liam asked me to be his girlfriend and i said yes!!!" through her crys i smiled and gave Liam my nod of appeoval. then sudennly Zayn yelled "-FULL!!!!!" trying to finish his sentence from 10 mins ago!!!! i giggled! Niall let go of my hand and told ne he would be right back, i agreed to let him go and for i to stay with the others!! "Zayn, your eyes are gorgous!!!!" Emily stated and he asked her to be his Gf and she said yes!!!!! They exchanged numbers!! then when i got to Nadia i thought to play a prank on her and sincewehad been BFFS since birth i knew she would understand the joke i said "She is the most horrible person ever!!!" harry got up when Nadia pretended to cry.., so i said "JUST KIDDING "N"!!!!! lol we both burst out laughing!!! so did harry!!!!!! we got up and said no really brag about your bff JUST KIDDING lol!! we joke around all the time!!! Then i finally say " She is totes Awesome!!!!!" then harry said " Nadia you are the most beautiful thing i ever layed my eyes on!!" she loved it and hugged him!! and they became bf & gf. when i got to Lou & Amanda they were already kissing....so i guess i took longer than i thought to introduce everybody lou and amanda both became a couple!!! and niall came back......
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SORRY IT WAS SO LONG
Lauren

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Jul 29, 2012
 
Its great and meh it doesnt matter bout the length just aslong as u keep writing :p and my friend says looooovvvveee itt
Kenzi_NN_Fizzy

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Jul 29, 2012
 
Hey guys ease dont be afraid to give constructive critasisum and leave things rhat you think should happen i swear i will find a way to add them in and i hope you like it so far!!!!!!!!! <3 live you all!!!!!!!
<3 -Fizzy
Kenzi_NN_Fizzy

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Jul 29, 2012
 
*Please*

oh and um guys imma write more and post it soon or tommorow afternoon either one soo 2 more and ill post again and could you spread the word about this??
Kenzi_NN_Fizzy

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Jul 29, 2012
 
I am writing now i promise this chapter coming up is better than the last two
Kenzi_NN_Fizzy

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#17
Jul 29, 2012
 
I AM BACK!!!!!(; who wants more???

Since: Jul 12

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Jul 29, 2012
 
This is amazing! Ad I love how I am crying... Lol. That would be me!
Allison Wagner

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Jul 29, 2012
 
More more
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Jul 29, 2012
 
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