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Makenzie K...

Milwaukee, WI

#1 Aug 7, 2012
EMILY POV:

I inched my way down the long sidewalk as the cold breeze nipped at my face. It sent shivers down my back as it tugged on my wavy brown hair. I peeked through the window of a familiar cafe. It seemed rather warm and not many people were inside. In fact, no one was inside except the cafe owner Danny. I entered the cafe and the bell dung as usual.
"Hey Emily. The normal tea?" He asked. I nodded my head and made my way to a table in the far corner. Five guys stumbled into the cafe laughing and cracking jokes. They seemed around my age of 18. Danny took their order and they sat on the leather sofas. "Emily! Your tea is ready!" Danny called to me. I got up and walked to the counter. "How much Danny?" I asked. "On the house." He replied. I took out £5 and set it on the counter. He shook his head but took the money. I began to walk out the cafe. "Leaving so soon?" Danny said as he handed the boys their tea. "Uh, yeah. I have to get home before the girls cut my head off." I said walking out the door. I heard Danny chuckling from behind me as the door closed.
Jennifer Tomlinson

London, UK

#2 Aug 7, 2012
Pls continue! If u need gfs, can I be Louis gf? ;) I luv it so far!!
Makenzie K...

Milwaukee, WI

#3 Aug 7, 2012
Jennifer Tomlinson wrote:
Pls continue! If u need gfs, can I be Louis gf? ;) I luv it so far!!
Of course!!(: thank you do much!!
Makenzie K...

Milwaukee, WI

#4 Aug 7, 2012
My phone went off and I answered without checking caller ID. "Hello?" I answered. "Are you trying to kill us!!" My good mate Maddie shouted on the other end. "Nope, why?" I replied like it was completely normal. "You left the candle lit and Jessica tripped and knocked it over! You damn lucky Jennifer knows how to use the fire extinguisher!" She continued to shout. "I'm on my way home." I assured her and hung up before she yelled my ear off.
Loads of screaming came from behind me. I turned around an seen those five lads running with 100+ girls behind them. I took off running and turned into the alley way. Just my luck the boys turned too and smashed into me. I fell on my bum and so did the blonde boy. "What the hell!" I exclaimed. "Sorry." The blonde boy mumbled and helped me up. "Do you have a flat nearby?" A boy with extremely curly hair asked. "Uh, yeah. Just down the street and take a left." I said hesitantly. "Great! Can we hide there?" He asked again. "I guess." I said leading the way.
The girls caught us and we ran all the way to my flat. They followed us in and we made a mad dash for the elevator. "Hey Kelly." I said running past the receptionist. "Hi." She replied confused. We hit the button to my floor and the doors closed. We all panted heavily. "Who. Are. You. Guys?" I asked between breaths. Note to self, go to gym. "Im Liam, this is Harry, Louis, Niall and Zayn." A boy with some what curly hair stated pointing to each boy. "I'm Emily. I live with 4 other girls." I told them. They all nodded.
The elevator dung as we got to my floor. It opened and we ran to my door just in case there were any girls. I unlocked my door and led the boys in. "Emily! Help!" Jennifer yelled running into the room. She tried to stop but slipped and fell. My other good mate Danielle was behind he running with a baseball bat. She tripped over Jennifer and landed face first into the carpet. "Woah, what's going on?" I asked utterly confused.
Makenzie K...

Milwaukee, WI

#5 Aug 7, 2012
Should I continue, or no?
Jennifer Tomlinson

London, UK

#6 Aug 7, 2012
[QUOTE who="Makenzie K..."]<quoted text>
Of course!!(: thank you do much!![/QUOTE]
Thanks!! No problem ;)
Jennifer Tomlinson

London, UK

#7 Aug 7, 2012
Pls continue!! If u want I'll ask on my forum for people to read! ;)
Kenzi-Love or Hate me IDC

Phoenix, AZ

#8 Aug 7, 2012
Yes
Makenzie K...

Milwaukee, WI

#9 Aug 7, 2012
Jennifer Tomlinson wrote:
Pls continue!! If u want I'll ask on my forum for people to read! ;)
Thank you!(:
Jennifer Tomlinson

London, UK

#10 Aug 7, 2012
[QUOTE who="Makenzie K..."]<quoted text>
Thank you!(:[/QUOTE]
I've asked! Pls continue!!
Makenzie K...

Milwaukee, WI

#11 Aug 7, 2012
"Danielle is trying to flocking kill me!!" Jennifer screamed and got to her feet Maddie walked into the room and froze. "Is that One Direction?" She asked. "What? Where?" I asked doing a full circle. She pointed at the boys. Liam nodded his head. "Yep, we are One Direction." Jessica walked into the room. "Emily where did you put the damn flour!" She exclaimed. "Oh hey One Direction." "Under the cutlery cabinet." I assured her and she turned in her heal heading back into the kitchen.
Danielle got up and threw the baseball bat on the sofa. "I'm Danielle." She introduced herself. Jennifer and Maddie did the same. "So whats the plan now?" I asked. "I don't know but we can't leave because the fans are blocking the entrance." Louis said walking to the sofa. He slipped on the foam of the extinguisher and fell on his bum. Jennifer went to help him up and ended up falling as well.
Danielle and Liam ended up getting both of them to their feet. Maddie was flirting with Harry and Danielle was chatting with Liam. "Uh, what is Jessica doing." I asked. Jennifer grinned and ran up the stairs. I walked into the kitchen and Jessica froze when she saw me. Flour was everywhere and there was something on the ceiling. "Is that potato salad?" I asked hesitantly. Jessica slowly nodded and darted out the room. I followed her and seen as she had crashed into Zayn. That's was a great sight to see.
Lou_Tommo_Fan

Rancho Cucamonga, CA

#12 Aug 7, 2012
More
Erica

Prince George, Canada

#13 Aug 7, 2012
This is great! If its ok could I have a part in it? A gf or just a friend would be wonderful :) if not that's ok to :)
Anonymous

Warrenton, VA

#14 Aug 7, 2012
More more plzz
Makenzie K...

Milwaukee, WI

#15 Aug 7, 2012
I'll post more right now, sorry I was at practice.
Makenzie K...

Milwaukee, WI

#16 Aug 7, 2012
It sucked for Maddie and Jessica because they weren't staying. The deal was two of our mates switch with Maddie and Jessica. They spend time in the others flat with their roomies. They leave tomorrow and our mates come back. Don't get me wrong, I love Maddie and Jess but they have to leave.
"How long do you plan on staying?" I asked Niall who seemed to be paying attention. "If the crowd doesn't leave, can we bunk here?" He asked shyly. "Sure." I said walking to my room. "I'll be right back, girlies don't kill them boys." I hollered making my way up the steep stairs. As I was shuffling around in my draws I heard a giant thud come from downstairs. I hesitated but continued to look for fresh clothing.

MADDIE POV:

"Ahhhhhh!!!" Louis belched out and did a dolphin dive behind the couch. "Owch!" Harry cried as Louis landed on him. Liam facepalmed himself and got tackled by Niall. "Lalalalallalalalalala! " Louis screamed pulling off his shirt and whipping it around like a helicopter. Jessica was trying to help Liam up and got pushed over by Jennifer. The love chair magically got flipped over by Zayn who got scared by Harry. Danielle was twirling around and dancing. She accidentally kicked the lamp making it land on the floor. Luckily it didn't brake.
"What. The. Hell?!" Emily said from the top of the stairs. All of us froze in the position we were. She began to walk down the stairs but slipped in fell. Niall caught her quickly and everything resumed back to the way it was. Zayn was on Harry's back and Liam was hiding under the table with Danielle. Louis was hanging from the ceiling fan, and Niall was carrying Emily bridal style. Jennifer was chasing Louis who was now on the ground. Jessica found my stash of muffins and proceeded to throw them at people.
I ran and tackled Jessica to the ground making the ugly cupcakes fly everywhere. One chuck hit Zayn right in the face and another hit Louis near the heart. Louis looked down and clutched his chest. "I got hit!!" He screamed and fell to the floor. "Noooooo!!!" Harry exclaimed and dove towards Louis. He sulked over Louis''Dead' body and hit the floor. "I'm a zombie, rahh!" Louis growled standing up. He extended his arms and began chasing Jennifer who was screaming rather loudly.
There was a knock on the door and everyone froze. Emily signaled that we be quiet. She tiptoed to the door and cracked it open. She was talking with someone but we couldn't tell who. A loud rumble came from someone's bum and Niall's face burned red. "Niall tooted!!" Louis whisper/yelled plugging his nose. Niall began to do his adorable silent laugh. This was truly the best night of my life!

Makenzie K...

Milwaukee, WI

#17 Aug 7, 2012
Should I continue or no? It's your option, your opinion is what keeps this FanFic alive, or makes it die
Anonymous

Warrenton, VA

#18 Aug 7, 2012
Continue Defanitly continue
Lou_Tommo_Fan

Rancho Cucamonga, CA

#19 Aug 7, 2012
Continue
Jennifer Tomlinson

London, UK

#20 Aug 8, 2012
Continue!!! Sorry I was asleep lol ;)

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