Wish on a Star (fanfic)

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#513
Aug 12, 2012
 
Brittany_Styles wrote:
Kaeleigh POV
I could tell Rachel was scared. Her eyes were bloodshot red and she was still shaking. Not as bad tho but she was still shaking. Rachel was in Liam's lap and he was rocking her back and forth like a baby. He was so sweet. After they loaded up the things from the signings we headed for the airport . It was getting Late. Everyone fell asleep exept for me and Liam. He was caressing Rachel's hair while she was asleep. I ended up falling asleep. It wasn't long at all. I woke up to Louis shaking me. "Dominika ! Wake up we need to board the plane. C'mon we're late" everyone was Running around grabbing luggage and everything. I jumped up and joined everyone else. Running and grabbing luggage. We got off the bus and Louis grabbed me. "WAIT! We can't leave without security surrounding us" "oh yeah I forgot" we got escorted to board the plane. Liam was constantly looking behind him. Even though he wouldn't see because of the security guard. "I have to go to the bathroom" Rachel said to Liam . "can you wait please . There's a bathroom on our private plane" "yes I guess so" "Kay" .
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#514
Aug 12, 2012
 
Hunter Stylinson143 wrote:
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post post post post?(:
She's posting more just wait a couple minutes
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#515
Aug 12, 2012
 
Cool! Keep going
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#516
Aug 12, 2012
 
I love it!!!!!!

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Aug 12, 2012
 
Lou_Tommo_Fan wrote:
<quoted text>She's posting more just wait a couple minutes
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#518
Aug 12, 2012
 
Ok, and hurry (;
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#519
Aug 12, 2012
 
OMG! The last post was supposed to be Dominikas POV !!! Sorry ! This is kaeleighs POV. Soo sorry!

Kaeleigh POV
I didn't like this at all ! We were surrounded by security guards and fans wanted autographs and pictures but security wouldn't let them. The boys begged them to let them take pics. We had plenty of time. Our plane wasn't there yet. It's actually funny because Paul woke Louis up saying that we were late for our plane and Lou told Dominika that and that's what we all believed. It wasn't supposed to be here for another hour. Zayn talked the security into letting them snap pics and sign autographs. There was this adorable baby this woman was holding. I couldn't resist I had to go hold her. I walked up to the woman and said "may I hold her?" "oh yes sure , here you go" "she's adorable" "THANKYOU" she had beautiful blue eyes and blonde hair. She was so adorable. "here you go miss. I've got to get back over there. She's very beautiful." "thankyou bye Goodnight" I walked back to the boys , who was still taking pics and signing things. I noticed Rachel gone. I started to panik . She was risking going to the bathroom alone when she just got a death threat. "Liam where's Rachel?"
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#520
Aug 12, 2012
 
its ok :) this is rele good... plzzzz keep going!!!!!!

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#521
Aug 12, 2012
 
Keepp going pleaessssss
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#522
Aug 12, 2012
 
This is awesome! Keep going
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#523
Aug 12, 2012
 
Okay I'm typing now!!
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Aug 12, 2012
 
Kaeleigh POV continued......
Liam looked around when I asked where Rachel was. "she must've went to the restroom" I could tell he wanted to search for her but the fans were surrounding him and he couldn't get thru. "I'll look for her" i ran to the restroom . She wasn't there . I looked everywhere. I Tried now to panick but I couldn't help it. I was walking down the hall , turned the corner and there she was . At the snack machine . I ran up to her and hugged her . "Kaeleigh what's wrong" "I thought i lost you" she laughed. "you don't really think she'd follow me do you?" she tried to laugh it off but I knew by the look on her face that she was worried . "no ... Of course not" "okay let's get back before we freak the boys out haha" we headed back . She offered me one of her M&M's but I wasn't really hungry . We was about to turn the corner and suddenly someone snatched me and Rachel off the ground and started running. I began to scream but he covered my mouth !! I bit his finger and screamed "HELP" he dropped me and Rachel groaning because of his finger. Me And Rachel get on our feet and run as fast as we could. I could hear the man yell "I'LL GET YOU NEXT TIME!"
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#525
Aug 12, 2012
 
čou guys are AWSOME!!!! 513 comments!!! WOW! Lol thanks to all of you who read my fanfic! I love you guys!
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#526
Aug 12, 2012
 
More please!!!

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#527
Aug 12, 2012
 
Pleaseeeeee write more
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#528
Aug 12, 2012
 
I've got school tomorrow :/ I have to go to bed ! Sorry ! I can't post until tomorrow afternoon! That sucks!

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#529
Aug 12, 2012
 
yeah ,we do like it
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#530
Aug 12, 2012
 
Omg this is crazy!!!!!! Love it though!
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#531
Aug 12, 2012
 
Thanks everyone I'm glad you like it. I won't be able to post until tomorrow afternoon when I get home from school.
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#532
Aug 13, 2012
 
Okay!!:)

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