Sexy Sway (BabyBleu_so-icy's first fanfic)

I'm new here, but I've been wanting to post a fanfic for awhile now. Here is the introduction, if your interested:

"In this competition, you will be judged on rhythem, skill, the moves and comdos, ability, originality, and, most important of all, CHEMISTRY.", Mr. Fulton, the dance academy administrator said, "If there is no chemistry, you have no chance. If you know you don't I advise you to get up and get out" he said pointing toward the door. Three couples got up and left. Corbin started to get up, but I pulled him back down. "Corbie, where are you going?" I asked him. He looked at me confused. "Is (My nickname), you know we have no chemistry. We're just friends." he said. "We can do it." I said, reassuringly. "Isis, when I do something, I go all out. I don't want this to interfere with our friendship. Are you sure your up for this?" He explained. "We can do it." I said looking into his eyes. Those big brown eye were so enchanting. I really liked him, as more than a freind, but he didn't know that. He couldn't know that. "Okay," he said, interupting my thoughts, "I guess we can do it." He smiled and grabbed my hand. I couldn't help but smile back. That smile was the most gorgeous smile ever and it was so contageious. He was so muscular and I loved the way his curls bounced when he walked. As we listened to Mr. Fulton ramble on and on about what it took to win the dance competition, I couldn't help but think that something spectacular was going to happen in the process.

So... what do you think? Should I continue or not?

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Okay, here is chapter one.

Chapter one:

"Right, left, twirl..." Laurieann (Corbin's choreogropher), was counting off the moves to us as we did them, "TWIRL... Isis, you have to let him take the lead. Your a wieghtless feather. Dance, but let him take control." We were practicing for the dance competition. We had already gone through tryouts and.. we actually made it. Now we were in a hot dance studio, infront of a mirror, dancing and sweating our tails off. "You guys are doing great!" she said with a smile on her face, "But, Isis, when that twirl comes, remember to let him take control." She patted the back of her right hand on the palm of the left. Corbin and I shook our heads "yes". "Okay," she said, grabbing her car keys and her jacket, "I guess we're done here." She opened the door and was gone. Now it was silent. We had both gone our seperate ways, packing our gear and getting ready to leave. "So, Is, you gonna need a ride home?" he asked, still packing. "Actually, I was hoping to go over to your house. My mom's at one of her usual press confrences and I didn't want to have to go home alone." I replied. "What about Marquet?" he asked, "Shouldn't he be there?" Marquet was my eleve year old brother. "We could pick him up from practice on the way there." I said. "Cool.", was the reply.

sorry it was kinda short, here is another

where is it?lol.

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yeah keep going

Sorry about that. I was righting it, but then I had to stop because we were leaving, but here it is.

Chapter two:

When we walked into the dance studio, there were only four people left. Ms. Trinece (the teacher), Marquet, Hunter, and Phoenix. Marquet was the only boy in an all girl class. "Hey, both of my mini me's in the same room." Corbin commented with a smile. "Hey!" Phoenix and Marquet said at the same time. I couldn't help but laugh they were so cute, standing there with there hands on their hips. "Come on guys." I said, ushering them towards the door. "Later Ms. T." Corbin said waving to her. By the time we got out to the car, the three were already telling us about the excitement of their latest dance practice. "Ms. T says I'M the tops in the class," Marquet bragged, "Even if I'm not the oldest." "That's my little bro." I said, giving him a nuggie, "But save the bragging for school" I raised my eybrow at him. "Okay sis.", was his reply. "What about you?" Corbin asked as we sped off (not too fast though), "Hunter, Phoenix?" "Ms. T says that I'M improving." Phoenix said. "I've been entered into the advanced addition." Hunter said with a smile. "High five!" I said turning around and holding up my hand. She slapped it. I saw Corbin give her a thumbs up in the rearview mirror. She smiled back and mouthed a "Thank You". The rest of the ride was pretty much silent, aside from the ocasional laugh I gave out when Corbin reached over to tickle me.
This had gone on five times until I finally said, "Stop! Corbin." "Sorry, I was just having fun with you." he said. "It won't be fun if you hit a car." I said back. "I won't hit a car." he said, raising one eyebrow. "Even so, you could hit something else." I said with a smirk, "Like a wall, maybe." I wa thinking about the time Corbin tried to park, and instead of pressing on the break, he hit the gas and the car accelerated into a brick wall. We didn't get hurt and the wall ws perfectly fine, but the car... not so good. Corbin grimaced at the thought. "Hey, it was only, like my second time behind the wheel of a car." he said, "Besides, I won't hit anything because, we're here." he said, putting the car in Park. We all got out and filed into the house.

The Three, as I called them, were watching tv in the living room and Corbin and I went up to his room. I sat on his leopard print bed, while he sat on the leopard print chair, next to his blue lava lamp. "I love your room!" I said laying back. He jumped on the bed next to me, "I love YOU." he whispered. I loked at him confused. "What?" I asked. "You know, as a friend." He insisted. "Right." I said. After that, things were a little akward. "Maybe we could practice the routine a bit." I said breaking the silence. "Sure." He said. He popped in the CD and we got into the starting stance. We were doing the Tango. The music started and we began our routine. He held me close as my hips swayed to the music. We had only gone over half of the routine and that had ended in the twist (which we did perfectly), but, to my suprize, we didn't stop.
We kept going and the dance bcame more intense. I was in the mood, it felt like we'd never stop. Suddenly, Corbin just stopped. I was so confused right now. He lifted my chin, looked deeply into my eyes, and he, ever so lightly, kissed me. It became uncontrollably passionate and I felt like I was floating on a cloud, until...

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Ooooooooo!!! So sexy!! if only that happened to me!!

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Keep going! It's really good!!! Plz update soon!-LoveXoXo_MayMay

Chapter three:

Corbin pulled away. Both of us were out of breathe. "Why-" I started. He ushered his head toward the door. I looked, and there, standing in the doorway, was little jag, rubbing her eyes. She looked really sad. Corbin walked over to her with his arms out. He picked her up and put her on his right hip. "What's wrong sweetie?" he asked, wiping the tears from her face with his thumb. "Had a bad dweam (dream)" she said. "Why didn't you go tell Mom?" he asked her. "Cause they were doing the thing you were doing." she said back. "They were doing that?" I asked walking up to them. Corbin and I looked at eachother and grimaced. "Ew." we said at the same time. "So they didn't notice you?" Corbin asked. She shook her head "no". "Should I make the monsters go away?" he asked, nodding his head. She nodded back. He put her down and she grabbed his hand. We walked to her room and Corbin went on his search for the monsters. He was such a great big brother. Corbin went through the room swinging and chopping at the air. He looked so silly. When he seemed to be done, he went over to jag and picked her up. "No more monsters Jag." he said. "Tanks bwother." she said back, smiling. "Your welcome." he said, tapping her on the nose. He laid her down in her bed and kissed her on the cheek. "Sleep tight." he whispered, tucking her back into bed. We quietly left out of the room and closed the door behind us. He brushed a loose strand of hair behind my ear, put his hand on my cheek, and looked into my eyes. His face slowly inched closer to mine. Someone cleared their throat. I turned my head.

Corbin's POV:

I missed. She turned her head as soon as I was about to kiss her. I sighed. "Isis, I want to go home." I heard Marquet say. I swallowed, shook my head, and sighed again. "Okay Quet, I'll be there." she said. "Please don't go." I said softly, "Atleast stay for dinner." I said, sorta begging. She smiled. I love her smile. "Quet?" she said.

My POV:

"Whatever." was his reply. "The only reason I'm staying is, Hunter." he whispered into my ear. "Your first crush?" I whispered back. "Yeah." he said. I looked up at Corbin and smiled. "We'll stay." I said. "YES!" he exclaimed. The four of us looked at him wierd. "I..I mean, cool." he said with a wide smile.

Aww....good chapter! Keep 'em coming!