Hey! I'm writing a new Jonas Brothers story
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“Nora is my BFFL!!!” Joined: Aug 14, 2007 Comments: 655 Dream Land ISP: Winston Salem, NC |
Hey everyone! I'm writing a new jonas brothers story but I need names for all of the characters! If you want me to insert your name as the character....just write in and tell me! Here's a list of the character description:
*main character who Nick Jonas falls in love with *main chracter's best friend *girl who used to go out with Nick Jonas *Kevin Jonas's girlfriend *Joe Jonas's girlfriend *main character's mom *main characters boyfriend That's all for now....I'll have mroe characters up later! |
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“Jamie Bell <3 <3” Joined: Jun 18, 2007 Comments: 2437 |
it sounds good.can i be it:)
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“hi”
Joined: Aug 18, 2007 Comments: 1241 the capital of cali ISP: Sacramento, CA |
can i be the one nick falls in love with??? or joes gf??? either one is fine. lol. my name is jessica!!!!!!
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“Nora is my BFFL!!!” Joined: Aug 14, 2007 Comments: 655 Dream Land ISP: Winston Salem, NC |
ok, you can be the one Nick falls in love with. Here's the first chapter. Hope you like it!! chapter 1 "The Jonas Brothers are a group of pig-headed, two-faced OMGers who will never pass the SATs because all they know are guitar string and song lyrics. They have no regard for anyone but themselves." Me, Jessica Johnson, says this. I'm talking to my best friend, Megan Law. "I dunno, Jessica. Isn't that kind of harsh? Plus, you've only met them once." "No, it's not harsh. And meeting them once was all the time I needed." I'm sitting backstage. I'm about to go on stage and have a "discussion" with the Jonas Brothers (about why I called them all those nasty things) which will be aired on E! Channel. Suddenly Nick comes over. "Hey, beautiful. Good luck." He ran his fingertips through my hair and winked. "I really hope you didn't just eat pizza or something greasy", I say, staring at his fingernails. "Maybe I did. Want to taste?" He puckers his lips and leans toward me. Somehow, I feel the urging to pull forward. Nevertheless, I stay back and pretend like I hate him. "No, I don't, now get out of here before I make you." "How will you make me?" "Just go!" Then he leaves, laughing. Megan looks at me with wide eyes. "Gosh, Jessica, does he have a crush on you?" I look around. "Maybe, I don't know. Something happened last summer when I went on vacation with them...but I don't want to talk about it." Then after I say that, Kevin starts heading towards me......once he sees Megan, he turns away. And I hear Joe say, "Did you tell her?" Then Kevin says, "No, she'd laugh at me. It will never work." Oh gosh...this will be an all-out war. "How could you say those things about me?" Me and Nick are backstage, and I'm getting a drink of water. I move away from the water dispenser, and say quietly, "Those are things I thought were true." Suddenly he almost pins me up against the wall. "They're not true, and you know it." His voice has an ominous ring to it, and his finger is on my shirt. Please not pizza, please not pizza... He moves one step closer. "My heart is breaking..." I partially cover my face with my hands...whoa, mood swing! Huh? "But you always look so happy, smiling, singing..." "It takes one smile to cover up a million tears." "I-I mean, what did I--" And suddenly we both turn around, because Kevin is standing there. He saw the whole thing. "Jessica...call me later...please." There's a pleading look in his eyes. I nod. And he opens my clenched hand, presses his lips to it, and puts a crumbling piece of paper into it. He then gives me a kiss on the cheek and literally runs. Kevin just looks at me. Me, I cry. |
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“Jamie Bell <3 <3” Joined: Jun 18, 2007 Comments: 2437 |
thats good can i be in it. wink wink:)
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“Nora is my BFFL!!!” Joined: Aug 14, 2007 Comments: 655 Dream Land ISP: Winston Salem, NC |
yeah, you can be in it....just give me yur name so I can put you in the second chapter.....:D |
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“hi”
Joined: Aug 18, 2007 Comments: 1241 the capital of cali ISP: Sacramento, CA |
ooh, i love how nicks totally in love with me! but id never say that to jb. but in the real world, itd be the opposite, with me loving nick, and not the other way around. omg, i can picture him in my mind. he looks so hot. lol.
--- oh, and ur a great writer:) |
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“Nora is my BFFL!!!” Joined: Aug 14, 2007 Comments: 655 Dream Land ISP: Winston Salem, NC |
OMG, Thank you sooo much! Here's the next chapter.....hope you like it!!
chapter 2 "So, are you going to call him?" Megan and I are sitting down on my bed. "Yes--no--I mean...so okay I have no clue." This is ripping me apart, and two days after the incident, I still can't get the gut to call him. "Someone's knocking on your window." I open the window, and there he is, singing and playing his guitar. "I can't stop the rain from fallin', I can't stop my heart from callin' you...it's callin' you. It's callin' you...Jessica." I cry and shut the window. I can't take this. Then my mom knocks on my door. "Honey, what was that?" She says from behind the door. Think fast, think fast..... "Um, it was the radio!" Megan yells. Thank goodness for Megan. "Okay, well, will you take these brownies to Mrs. Jonas? They're a present for Nick's birthday...his birthday's today...did you remember?" I wipe some quickly-forming tears from my eyes. "No, it, er, slipped my...um...mind." "Oh, and Megan...your Mom called. You have to go home now." And then she closed the door. Then Megan gave me a quick hug. "Good luck. You're going to need it." So, yeah, the Jonas's are my next-door neighbor, and they're best friends with my mom. Life can be so luckily divine. So I'm shaking as I make my way to their house. I climb the steps,clutch the railing, and eat a mint. Oh my gosh. What if Nick answers the door? I straighten myself and ring the doorbell, and who should answer, but....Nick. I try not to make eye contact. "These are for your for Mother for your birthday." I say quickly, tumbling over my words. I look at the ceiling, then the floor, then the pictures lined up against the wall where the stairs are. "Oh, okay...why don't you give them to her yourself. Mommy! Jessica Johnson's here!" Then he grabbed my hand and led me into their living room and sat me down, then sat beside me. He smelled of Ode de Sweat...he must have been exercising. Then he winked and said, "the sweet smell of running success, huh?" I laughed. The smell was choking me...how can one 14-year-old boy smell like 4 herds of sheep? Finally Mrs. Jonas came down the steps with a load of laundry. "Oh, Mandy, thank you very much. Tell your mother I'm so thankful." Then Nick whispered something in her ear and she smiled. "Nick, what a great idea. What if you stay for dinner and dessert? Nick is just having the people closest to him...and none of his guy friends will be here. It'll just be his family and you, if you want to stay." She emphacized the word closest and Nick mouthed the words I love you. Amazing. I gulped. "How about--uh--I call my mom and--uh, she can decide." Mrs. Jonas then called my mom, and it was decided...I would stay. My mom wouldn't come because Dad was away on a business trip and she had scheduled a fancy dinner at Pirouette the Restaurant four months prior with her best friend Lindy and who knows when that would happen again so I would stay there till 9:00 PM. So I'm here, with the Jonas Brothers. "That's great", said Nick. I just flashed him a smile and said, "Happy Birthday, Nick." Heavenly......... |
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“Nora is my BFFL!!!” Joined: Aug 14, 2007 Comments: 655 Dream Land ISP: Winston Salem, NC |
And here's the second part of that chapter:
"Jessica, you can sit right there, and....Kevin, you sit on the left of Mandy, and Nick....sit to the right of Mandy....and Frankie, you can sit...." A tingly sensation came over me. I was sitting next to Nick. Suddenly I realized Kevin staring at me......oh no....Kevin likes me.....and he's sitting beside me too! "Can you pass the steak, please?" "Sure", both Kevin and Nick say at the same time. They both grab it, and look at each other. "I'll get it", says Kevin. "No, I'll do it. It's fine." "No, I will." "Didn't you say you burned your hands this morning?" "No, Joe did. I can get it, it's really not a big deal." "Okay...", but Kevin still didn't let go. "Kevin, I'll get it." "Okay..." and then he let go. One of the pieces almost fell off but didn't. "Which piece do you want?" I looked at them. I hate steak, but I didn't want to seem rude. Plus, it was Nick's birthday. Life is so cruel to me. "Um, the smallest one." "Okay." Then he forks it onto my plate and says, "would you like me to cut it for you?" I smile. He's so sweet, I don't deserve his sweetness. Some other girl does, one that fawns and dotes and always listens and doesn't slam the window in his face. I nod. How much longer will this go on? I mean...seriously...suddenly I see him staring at me and I say, "Um, can I help you?" I say it with a sarcastic hint. He caught it loud and clear. "Yeah, you can...?" "What do you need?" "Do you like tiramisu? " "Yeah, I love it." "Good. That's what we're having for dessert." "That's great." And then he looks into my eyes....ahhhh....those beautiful, beautiful eyes..........when you look into my eyes, Nick...... |
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“Jamie Bell <3 <3” Joined: Jun 18, 2007 Comments: 2437 |
do u want my name or nickname |
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“Nora is my BFFL!!!” Joined: Aug 14, 2007 Comments: 655 Dream Land ISP: Winston Salem, NC |
Um, it doesn't really matter--whichever you prefer....... |
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Joined: Aug 18, 2007 Comments: 1241 the capital of cali ISP: Sacramento, CA |
r u leaving, nick j is off the chain???
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Yes, I am leaving.
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“hi”
Joined: Aug 18, 2007 Comments: 1241 the capital of cali ISP: Sacramento, CA |
nooooooooooooo! y???? |
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“hi”
Joined: Aug 18, 2007 Comments: 1241 the capital of cali ISP: Sacramento, CA |
hey nick j, r u gonna finish the story??? cuz i really want 2 know what happens 2 me and nick! lol :) pleeez finish it!
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“Jamie Bell <3 <3” Joined: Jun 18, 2007 Comments: 2437 |
nickname my naicname is jelly but u can use a different |
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“Jamie Bell <3 <3” Joined: Jun 18, 2007 Comments: 2437 |
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1 chapter 3 Nick just looked at me...it was weird. "Um, Nick? Reality check?" Then he busted out of this trance he was in. "Sorry. I do that that sometimes." "What, stare into space?" "No...stare at you." Oh my. Suddenly, my phone rang with, "Inseperable", and a look of surprise crossed the faces of Kevin, Joe, and Nick. Joe laughed. "She must be a fan." And then I answered. "Hello? Yeah, hey dad. I thought you weren't coming home till Thursday. Why are you calling? What are you talking about? Yeah, Mom went to Pirouette's with Lindy, right? She didn't? She checked into a hotel? The Marriott on First Street? She got the...off the...Oh my gosh, no! You have to be kidding me! You're kidding, right? Well, I don't know how fast I can get over there...well, because it's Nick Jonas's birthday...that's why I wasn't at the house...yeah, he invited me over here. I'll see what I can do. Keep me updated, okay, Daddy? What? You can't still be in Trinidad!! Mom is in the hospital and you're in Trinidad?! This is all your fault! If you weren't always on some stupid trip in the Caribbean, Mom might not be there! Bye Dad. Yes--I'm listening--mmhmm--yes, I still love you-even if you're never there for me anyways." And I hang up--then I cry. "Jessica? What happened" I start sitting down, and try to explain it to them through the tears. "Well, whenever I-I came over here, my mom ch-checked into the Marriott on F-First Street. Th-then she went into the b-bathroom, and t-to-took the razor from o-off the bathroom c-counter. Th-then she started to-to- cut h-herself. She p-passed out from the pa-pain and loss of b-blood. Then the maid knocked on her d-d-door. Sh-she suspected something-s-so she went in, and s-saw my mom s-surrounded by a pool of bl-blood. She c-called 911 and she's a-at the hospital. I c-can't believe this. I have to get to the hospital." I wiped the tears and swallowed. The Kevin jumped up. "Oh my gosh, I just realized--they left the corvette from the shooting of the "Mandy" video. I can take you, that is, if it would be okay with your mom--oh, never mind. I need to ask my mom, hold on." Then he went over to Mrs. Jonas, and she nodded her head. "Yeah, you and her go. We would go, but we don't want Frankie to see that stuff yet. Nick and Joe, go with them. Jessica, we'll be praying for your family. Good luck." So we all rush out the door, and I grab my purse. So I jump in the front seat, and my phone rings again. This time it's, "please be mine", and it's Chase, my boyfriend. "Hey, no, Chase...it's not working? Thank you, Chase! My mom is in the hospital from cutting herself, and you call to say you cheated on me? Never talk to me again, Chase, okay? Oh, this is not the time for pity or forgiveness...Chase....don't tell me you love me!......We are SO over!" And I hang up, again. "Jessica, I'm sorry." Kevin puts his hand on top of mine. "It's fine. Chase was an idiot who never liked me. I should have known he would do me like this when I saw him hanging out with Ava...I don't care right now. I'll cry later. How much longer to the hospital?" And we drove up. When we were on our way down on the elevator, Kevin kissed me on the cheek and hugged me. "Jessica, I lo--", and he almost finished saying it when the doors split open. And I went to face my mother. |
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