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“not selena gomez just a fan ” Joined: Jan 1, 2008 Comments: 288 My hometown ISP: Lansing, MI |
Please add on to this and make it a long story. You can add as much as you like, but give others a chance. Thanks. I'll start it off.
One day, when I got out of school, I walked home in the scorching heat. Suddenly....... |
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“Say hello to my M203 ...” Joined: Jul 24, 2007 Comments: 2375 You wanna play rough? ISP: Clarksville, TN |
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“I was a Grim Reaper” Joined: Apr 3, 2007 Comments: 10067 But now I take antidepressants ISP: Fort Lauderdale, FL |
A giant eagle eagle flew down from a tree,then suddenly........ |
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Please add on to this and make it a long story. You can add as much as you like, but give others a chance. Thanks. I'll start it off.
One day, when I got out of school, I walked home in the scorching heat. Suddenly, I burst into flames but luckily a....... |
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“not selena gomez just a fan ” Joined: Jan 1, 2008 Comments: 288 My hometown ISP: Lansing, MI |
ummm hjs,
ur supposed to add to what the story already has |
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....a car pulled up and a guy jumped out with a fire extinguisher and put the fire out before i got too badly burned, but my eyes got full of the chemicals and i went blind, so got taken to the hospital to be operated on and then the anasthiesiologist fucked up and overdosed me and i hovered above myself watching the flat line....
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“Somewhere in Ireland”
Joined: Dec 11, 2006 Comments: 19650 Dublin ISP: Dublin, Ireland |
It dropped a small silver ring at my feet, and flew away, when I took the ring in my hand, it dazzled and sparkled, right then I knew I was in the possession of a |
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...Illuminata..... |
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“Somewhere in Ireland”
Joined: Dec 11, 2006 Comments: 19650 Dublin ISP: Dublin, Ireland |
This only urged me to try on the ring, when I fitted it on, I was immediately transported to another kingdom, I found myself sitting in a room which seemed to be entirely made from chocolate sweets, it was warm there, even a green fire in the corner.. but this chocolate did not seem to melt.. The first sound I heard in this strange kingdom was ... |
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“I was a Grim Reaper” Joined: Apr 3, 2007 Comments: 10067 But now I take antidepressants ISP: Fort Lauderdale, FL |
beautiful cracker jack toy. Man,how those prizes took me back to my childhood. Why I remember when.......... |
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I began feeling not my normal self, who would, in this heat especially since I had walked out of an airco building, I seem to be a bit light headed, cold sweat broke out, I was kind of disappearing into myself. I looked down at my nikes it seemed to be fluctuating losing its shape and going back into it. Even the sidewalk had a see-saw motion I looked left and right of me, the buildings were doing this same see-saw, expanding, contracting dance. Fear grab hold of me, shit I’m losing my mind, what the hell did I eat, or am I hungry. I decided to seek shade under one off the trees lining the sidewalk, holy cow the trees are doing the same thing, I was sure then that I had somehow entered the twilight zone. Stretching my hand toward the tree to balance my self, I noticed even my hand was not solid anymore, yet it felt solid, in any case I braced myself against the tree trunk and slide down to the ground. The ground felt solid but it too was moving up and down, expanding, contracting. A few kids I knew past me by laughing and talking, they were showing the same symptoms as everything else, yet they were not effected as I seem to be. I wanted to say something to them but decided to shut up, all those aliens movies came rushing into my mind. I wanted to get up and rush home, home suddenly became a safe haven. I shook my head with eyes closed a couple of times to clear my mind, this just made it worst everything shook with me, that’s when I became aware of some pretty strange sensations inside of me. It was inside yet outside of me. I was tranquil, yet hyper active, I lost all sense of space and time, I was flowing in and out of everything, was expanding and contracting, I somehow sensed/ felt what everything felt like, opening my eyes and looking around me I knew then I was seeing everything as it really is for the very first time I thought, yet this was not the first time. I have always seen everything this way I realise. Memory came rushing back with an immense speed, I was transported back in time, yet not back but in the same present time. I felt myself breathing, expanding, contracting, energy, power, desire was all me. I felt, what I now call the first dawn, fresh, new, pure, alive filled with energy and expectations, I was joyously happy seeing …. |
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Thinking does this mean I’m dead. What the heck how can I be dead and still see everything around me. I wonder what Mom and Dad will do, Mom will cry I’m sure and dad would be screaming about suing the hospital … |
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When I got caught stealing one from the neighbourhood store |
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Eat me, eat me, you like me, I like teeth, you eat me I eat your teeth |
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“Somewhere in Ireland”
Joined: Dec 11, 2006 Comments: 19650 Dublin ISP: Dublin, Ireland |
said the sticky new honey yellow lollipop with a high percentage of sugar.. |
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“Somewhere in Ireland”
Joined: Dec 11, 2006 Comments: 19650 Dublin ISP: Dublin, Ireland |
Not many people know this .. but .. sugar also has the unusual advantage of .. |
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“I was a Grim Reaper” Joined: Apr 3, 2007 Comments: 10067 But now I take antidepressants ISP: Fort Lauderdale, FL |
Suddenly,everyone thought I should run for a political office.But wait I told them......... |
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“I was a Grim Reaper” Joined: Apr 3, 2007 Comments: 10067 But now I take antidepressants ISP: Fort Lauderdale, FL |
Carmelizing under the right conditions. Of course,this involves lots of heat,so.......... |
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“stand up and be counted” Joined: Apr 7, 2007 Comments: 8264 Doncaster.S.Yorkshire. England ISP: Doncaster, UK |
Nonononono. HOLD IT.
The idea of the thread is that you follow the LAST post, not one from halfway up the page. The true last post mentioned SUGAR. In case anyone should forget what I've said, THIS is sugar too......... http://www.youtube.com/watch... Please.... follow the last post. Innuendo and fun are encouraged. If you don't like the song, dance. |
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