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(***) Make the Next Line Rhyme(***)

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“A *wink* and a smile!!”

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#102
Jul 12, 2012
 

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My heart is heavy for those in need
The fires, the drought and the floods it seems
Someone has made Mother Nature mad
and for this so many are sad

I hope and pray she changes her mind
And makes it rain and then we'll find
the fires put out and the drought will end
And once again Mother Nature will be a friend.

“My Darling is my life!”

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#103
Jul 12, 2012
 
On bended knee is where I'll be
hopeing and praying for this need

God has a way of sorting things out
I know in time, he'll end the drought

Mother nature to him will abide
Making it work, right by his side!

“A *wink* and a smile!!”

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Your words are so sweet and kind
Thank goodness you're a friend of mine.
Hopefully he will hear our prayers
Looking to the sky I will stare
Watching for thunder, wind and rain
To wash away all the worries again.

“My Darling is my life!”

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Jul 12, 2012
 

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http://www.youtube.com/watch...

Rain is a good thing
It'll make us laugh
It'll make us sing
Rain is a good thing
Hoosier Hillbilly

Connersville, IN

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#106
Jul 12, 2012
 
Would Steevi like to give Cowgirl a whirl?
She sounds to 'me' like she's all girl
And she has so many friends
friends only-her & Steevi-it all depends
don't mean to make any accusations
but 'i'd like to have her as an acquisition
then she could write poems to me
Well now! just how sweet and kind would that be?

“A *wink* and a smile!!”

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Jul 12, 2012
 

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Hoosier Hillbilly wrote:
Would Steevi like to give Cowgirl a whirl?
She sounds to 'me' like she's all girl
And she has so many friends
friends only-her & Steevi-it all depends
don't mean to make any accusations
but 'i'd like to have her as an acquisition
then she could write poems to me
Well now! just how sweet and kind would that be?
I have many friends this is true
So Hooiser please don't be blue
You and I are very new
A friend to me so who knew

I am all girl and love to rhyme
And thank you for this thread and in time
We will laugh and kid and tease
Like Steev and I and many so please

Enjoy your day
And be a friend
so we can rhyme
and play again...:)

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#108
Jul 12, 2012
 
It's tricky to rock a rhyme that's right on time.. how is it.. it's tricky tricky..

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Hoosier Hillbilly

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#109
Jul 12, 2012
 
WOW! WOW! what else can 'i' say
this gal sees things 'my' way
O.C. > sees' how it's suppose to be
& she 'chimes' right in for "US" to see
"WE" all like rhymes, it helps "US" fell free
so together "WE" march to ecstasy *!

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Jul 13, 2012
 

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Hoosier Man my neighbor my friend
it's good to see you rhyme again
I hope you have a wonderful day
I hope it goes your own way.
Hoosier Hillbilly

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Ohio Cowgirl

“A *wink* and a smile!!”

This gal has really got it all
personality and looks to boot
she's a 'keeper' who gives a "HOOT!"
& 'i'm not talk'n bout the call of an owl
'i'm say'n she's a great pal!
Hoosier Hillbilly

Richmond, IN

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#112
Jul 22, 2012
 
Making lines rhyme
takes time
winning the on-line game
is some peoples aim
no-time to make a rhyme
Hoosier Hillbilly

Liberty, IN

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#113
Jul 26, 2012
 
Wow! Did I have a time
finding this thread
it was buried back
in all the other hack
now it's time to spread
out and make it rhyme..
Hoosier Hillbilly

Liberty, IN

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#114
Jul 27, 2012
 
10 hours have past
and this thread last
on the front page
it looks @ this stage
Topix isn't moving fast
Calli Corinne

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#115
Jul 27, 2012
 
Most good times rarely ever last.

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#116
Jul 27, 2012
 
Calli Corinne wrote:
Most good times rarely ever last.
we hope to put our mistakes in the past.

Learning and moving forward is what we must do.

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#117
Jul 27, 2012
 
Good Morning my friends
Good morning my pals
Good morning to the chickens, the horses and cows.
Good morning to the trees, flowers, birds and bees
Good Morning to all
You're such sweet peas!!:)

Thanks HH for finding this,
I do so enjoy it!!:)

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#118
Jul 27, 2012
 
It is friday
this is true
sending best wishes
to all of you!

Have fun this weekend
and don't drink to much
because jail is not pretend
and we need to stay in touch!

To all my friends I say goodbye
but Monday I'll be back
because I'm the kinda guy
who will always have your back!
Hoosier Hillbilly

Brownstown, IN

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#119
Jul 27, 2012
 
TGIF is about past
S & S is still to come
how long can they last
back where 'i'm from
those 2 days went fast
cause Monday meant some
more work for the dumb

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#120
Jul 30, 2012
 
It's a new week
this is true
I hope it's a good one
for all of you....

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#121
Jul 30, 2012
 
Monday, Monday, Monday!
Not just another day
A fresh start, a new beginning
Time to set your sights on winning!

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