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“Hippie Witch”
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Since: May 08
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incognitoguy73 wrote: Please give honest opinion. My body trembles releasing my tears This pain in my heart has been cutting for years Why did you leave me? Why did I let you? Why didn't I fight, after all that we been through? I promised I'd die for you I feel like I lied to you. I just walked away when I should have been there for you, my heart was conflicted with no ideas what to do. I'm sorry I ran at a time you most needed me at a time in our lives when it should have been plain to see. I missed all the clues, the warnings and bells ever since then I've been living this hell. Now the years have gone by and they haven't been kind each waking moment it's you on my mind. I still look at your picture with these tears in my eyes wanting so badly to feel you wanting so badly to die. Beautiful, and definately something I can identify with.
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Since: Oct 11
Yorktown, VA
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Forrest Gump: Mama always had a way of explaining things so I could understand them.
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“What?”
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Since: Apr 12
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incognitoguy73 wrote: Please give honest opinion.
My body trembles releasing my tears This pain in my heart has been cutting for years Why did you leave me? Why did I let you? Why didn't I fight, after all that we been through? I promised I'd die for you I feel like I lied to you. I just walked away when I should have been there for you, my heart was conflicted with no ideas what to do.
I'm sorry I ran at a time you most needed me at a time in our lives when it should have been plain to see. I missed all the clues, the warnings and bells ever since then I've been living this hell. Now the years have gone by and they haven't been kind each waking moment it's you on my mind. I still look at your picture with these tears in my eyes wanting so badly to feel you wanting so badly to die. forgive me... Beautiful poem... I Know the feeling ...
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“What?”
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Since: Apr 12
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incognitoguy73 wrote: Please give honest opinion.
My body trembles releasing my tears This pain in my heart has been cutting for years Why did you leave me? Why did I let you? Why didn't I fight, after all that we been through? I promised I'd die for you I feel like I lied to you. I just walked away when I should have been there for you, my heart was conflicted with no ideas what to do.
I'm sorry I ran at a time you most needed me at a time in our lives when it should have been plain to see. I missed all the clues, the warnings and bells ever since then I've been living this hell. Now the years have gone by and they haven't been kind each waking moment it's you on my mind. I still look at your picture with these tears in my eyes wanting so badly to feel you wanting so badly to die. ever live in southeast Texas?
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“No mas pantalones”
Level 6
Since: Apr 08
Obamageddon
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incognitoguy73 wrote: Please give honest opinion. My body trembles releasing my tears This pain in my heart has been cutting for years Why did you leave me? Why did I let you? Why didn't I fight, after all that we been through? I promised I'd die for you I feel like I lied to you. I just walked away when I should have been there for you, my heart was conflicted with no ideas what to do. I'm sorry I ran at a time you most needed me at a time in our lives when it should have been plain to see. I missed all the clues, the warnings and bells ever since then I've been living this hell. Now the years have gone by and they haven't been kind each waking moment it's you on my mind. I still look at your picture with these tears in my eyes wanting so badly to feel you wanting so badly to die. Very well written
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“A *wink* and a smile!!”
Level 8
Since: Apr 10
USA
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It takes a long time to grow an old friend. ~ John Leonard~
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Since: Apr 12
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Thanks to all for the kind words for my poem.
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Sad but Wiser wrote: <quoted text>ever live in southeast Texas? Nope never lived in Texas but I spent a few nights in Tyler Texas a few years ago.
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CRaZy EyE SLY
Roscommon, Ireland
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THE WELSH HATE THE SCOTTISH FOR RAPING HAGGIS AND SHEEP THE SCOTTISH HATE THE WELSH SO RAPE THEM IN THEIR SLEEP OH THE IRISH HATE THE BRITISH THEY NUMB OUR NIPPLES WITH PEGS AND THEY DONT BELIEVE POTATOES ARE SACRED LEPRECHAUN EGGS. -c.e.l-
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Level 8
Since: Apr 09
Hotel California
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Beware of him that is slow to anger; for when it is long coming, it is the stronger when it comes, and the longer kept. Abused patience turns to fury. Francis Quarles
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“What?”
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Always Wary wrote: Beware of him that is slow to anger; for when it is long coming, it is the stronger when it comes, and the longer kept. Abused patience turns to fury. Francis Quarles Scary thought.
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“You Can't Judge My Choices,”
Level 7
Since: Sep 06
Without Knowing My Reasons!
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Sad but Wiser wrote: <quoted text> Scary thought. Ditto!
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“You Can't Judge My Choices,”
Level 7
Since: Sep 06
Without Knowing My Reasons!
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“Don't be reckless with other people's hearts, don't put up with those who are reckless with yours.” Mary Schmich quotes
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“What?”
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___MrsMurphy___ wrote: May you have the hindsight to know where you've been the foresight to know where you're going and the insight to know when you're going too far.
irish proverb Curious really... What does 'Erin go Braun' mean?
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La Sunshine wrote: “Don't be reckless with other people's hearts, don't put up with those who are reckless with yours.”
Mary Schmich quotes Nice quote.
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La Sunshine wrote: “Don't be reckless with other people's hearts, don't put up with those who are reckless with yours.”
Mary Schmich quotes Read your profile---how are you?
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“No mas pantalones”
Level 6
Since: Apr 08
Obamageddon
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Sad but Wiser wrote: <quoted text> Curious really... What does 'Erin go Braun' mean? 'Ireland Forever' Erin go braugh also Erin go bragh is a phonetic English version of Éirinn go brách, which in Irish Gaelic means "Ireland for ever." It was an Irish blessing used to express allegiance to Ireland. It could also translate as "Ireland until eternity."
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“No mas pantalones”
Level 6
Since: Apr 08
Obamageddon
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When we drink, we get drunk. When we get drunk, we fall asleep. When we fall asleep, we commit no sin. When we commit no sin, we go to heaven. So, let's all get drunk, and go to heaven! Irish Toast
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Since: Apr 12
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The single most important thing a man can do for his wife, is to just shut up. Ralph M Ballard My Grandpa RIP.
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“If you can't beat um join um”
Level 9
Since: Jun 11
Under the troll bridge
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Hunglo wrote: When we drink, we get drunk. When we get drunk, we fall asleep. When we fall asleep, we commit no sin. When we commit no sin, we go to heaven. So, let's all get drunk, and go to heaven! Irish Toast I'll drink to that :)
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