freestyle battle, spit it! (raps only)

natedogg wrote:

yo slugger stop messing with the real rappers
so that means your a cracker
me and chuck313 will rap u the real way
you and your stupid family is gay
so bye bye barbies boy

STOP FAKIN
UR DA SAME GUY
ITS NOT POSSIBLE U GUYS R BOTH FROM CARLTON

C'mon, let's do this
When it comes to the cash, we ain't equal
Rich man, poor man, poverty defeats you
Where my people? Yo, OLD TIMER see you
There's only one of you, that's why you gotta be you
Them others be see-through, flashin and flossin
Me I'm with Inebriated Beats in Boston
Strivin, survivin, we get cash often
But do you really know what daycare be costin?
All my fathers, all my mothers
All my sisters, all my brothers
Hold your head up and teach them younger cats
It ain't where you're from, it's where you're at!

Wizlerben wrote:

I don't give a sh** about what u sayin
we all kno ur just faking
I got pride in what u do
I kno how to make money
un like u
how much do mcdonalds b payin anyway
I kno u b makin minimum wage everyday
I don't give a shit tho, I'm just sayin
Damn this is strait up slaying
Man u better start obeying
I hope u will soon start to realize
I'm da real sh**
u start hatin and I'll bake u like a buiscit
man u don't kno what I been throu
I don't me to be bitchin but what r u
u rap like a fuckin Jew

STOP TALKIN SHIT
CUZ U A FAKE RAPPER TOO

The OLD TIMER is officially on blast
Don't worry about what he say, cuz he wont last
If you want to learn the way take a seat in this class
I write albums like singles and release them so fast
I get around the whole country on foot like WIZLERBEN
I don't fly across country I be there with the mass
Drivin, drivin, pulling up to your hood spot
You sayin to your son, "now this how radio should rock."
I pray for these radio cats cuz they don't know
how fast I be movin when they be movin slow
This ain't no fast food rap dude, get it and go
This that home cooked type meal, lyrical flow
Spiritual grow, ya know cuz ya was there, fo sho
Like Joey Greck I'm not the average Joe

ill rhymes wrote:

Yo, if you meet me in the streets your gunna be dead with 20 pieces of led shot straight up through your head
thats all i got.=/

YEA DATS ALL U GOT CUZ U WAK
ND NOT A REAL RAPPER

Show me an MC that think he's too hot
Bring him to OLD TIMER, I'll show him he's NOT
Blowin the whole spot up when I spit up
OLD TIMER, when I walk past, get up
My wrists ain't lit up! I don't even live that life
Gold, diamonds, platinum, I give to my wife - you see
Diamonds are a girl's best friend, not mine
You got it, FINE - but what about that rhyme?
Can you rhyme? Can you spit it quick
like watermelon pits at a picnic? Ha!
Or are you just dressed up with nowhere to go?
Or is the record company the pimp and you the ho?
LET'S GO!

Verbal Architect aka VA wrote:

<quoted text>
you say i rap like a jew well this is the holocaust
im knocking these fake bitches off the real snitch off
i even blast ya britches off so im on it by any means
youll never bake no one
u mad cuz you "think" im hating
ill be wasting time hating on no one hating on nothing
you aint got shit how you real G and you cant even talk shit
say it a again (whos really batting)
everything you pass you throwing a flat ball so you saying is not making it through the wall
i know
i dont listen to small talk bet ya ass got boost and you be sing like no ones around CI go head D-I-E you aint confidetial no more
bitch ass probably snitch on ya own police report
We dont like you
you talk 2 much
need to slay some deodorant and 6 pcks of mints
what you on ya 50 cent going around asking 20 question
curousity kill the cat and i killed you george
like tol that nicca b4 you can get on all 4s

SHUT UP
DAM I RIPPED THIS WHOLE FORUM APART

This is the way it's supposed to be
It's supposed to be like you more close to me
It's supposed to be about our families
It's supposed to be about avoiding catastrophe
But it's all about salary and flattery
Distrust, lust, hate and tragedy
It's supposed to be about you and me on the same route
Were you there in eighty-six when I first came out?
And you know about how they runnin' this game out
It's supposed to be about fun and getting' the pain out
But it's all about clout and poppin' them chains out
Instead of forgiveness, we poppin' they brains out
It's supposed to be about seekin' in the seek out
You witnessin' injustice, you got to speak out
If you claimin' you love this, you got to release doubt
Knowledge is what I'm all about

old timer wrote:

<quoted text>
STOP TALKIN SHIT
CUZ U A FAKE RAPPER TOO
The OLD TIMER is officially on blast
Don't worry about what he say, cuz he wont last
If you want to learn the way take a seat in this class
I write albums like singles and release them so fast
I get around the whole country on foot like WIZLERBEN
I don't fly across country I be there with the mass
Drivin, drivin, pulling up to your hood spot
You sayin to your son, "now this how radio should rock."
I pray for these radio cats cuz they don't know
how fast I be movin when they be movin slow
This ain't no fast food rap dude, get it and go
This that home cooked type meal, lyrical flow
Spiritual grow, ya know cuz ya was there, fo sho
Like Joey Greck I'm not the average Joe

bitch stop talkin bout how u so fly
i have no idea y
if u was so damn amazing
u wouldnt b up on this forum 24/7
thats right i kno
u reply to every fuckin post
go out and get a life
o thats right i forgot
society wont accept you
ur like a library book thats 10 years over due
stop fuckin up this forum with ur lame ass raps
its like ur pickin up scraps
and puttin them in any random order
i got an idea, get a tape recorder
spit ur rhymes and play it back a couple of times
remember to tell me
how fast u fall asleep
and begin to count sheep
now take that tape and send it to my address
i swear i wont b impressed
i been havin trouble sleepin lately that might be what i need
i think that will be just the thing to help me succeed
now back to ur rhymes
i think u have a career ahead of u
ur rhymes could help endues vomit
just like any music by blink 182
but as for now stick to Mcy Ds
my last order came out near perfect
i dont mean to disrespect
but next time try to make ur raps actually rhyme

just writin sum rhymes
was bored
just wrote it now

It's the teacher, class is open G
Let's get open on the concept of votin, we
Begin the discussion by viewin democracy
People power, a people ruled philosophy
Democracy is a system of government
Where the whole population is the sum of it
Where the goverment can't move without it's people
Where before the law everybody's equal
But take a look at the police and how they treat you
Take a look at these corporations that cheat you
Democrats and Republicans are all see-through
Now we votin for the lesser of two evils
Man, don't let 'em deceive you
This is an autocracy, not a democracy
But to call this a democracy without mock interest
In the laws of society, that's called hypocrisy!

everything i spit is real to me you sitting here thinking its all good like im charlie in the factory
the shit is real
mad struggle real pain real hustle doing her thang to make away that the real hustle you wanna take it back take it back to KRS-1 him and Scott made it to the top from the shelter son
so that mean to me all im tryna do is eat instead of a old schooler really preaching you a New schooler hating
take it back to the lost boys that lost ones like Lauren and still kept pushing
and that what i do for my everyday strife
musically starving tryna provide
we all got it hard be some chose to make it some chose to say fuck
now Question
Which one is me
im bias cuz my life was always on a diet so i learn to do two things
live and die
hustle and strive so while you knock what you dont know there is another man dying
so whats the differenc in your or my judgement
the difference is you grew up in a time where there was fight and barely crime so look at it now
can you blame the youth for seeing the truth of real murders people that are homeless and always looking for foos to even get stamps you have to have an established home
so who you really preaching to Old Timer
im young and i know all the old tricks but when your given a reality wishes and dreams are just fantasy everyday dollar is the serve the fienes but in fact your hustling for more struggles man
you think before Obama really gave a fuck
we still appreciate but more should have been given to us
the rich get richer and the poor man suffer and got to follow rules that them niccas on the hill give us
so really what you think you tryna get through that it wont be ok in our harsh struggles
some live others just live
you think them peopl really give
its 2 sets us and them
i can preach back on a real journey and missins so watch what you say cuz you never no know who go through shit
im not knocking on your opinion really dude just look at the subscription
ive been given insight of my life my everyday vision
VA Verbal Architect stay well on top even if the world arouns her just drops

old timer wrote:

<quoted text>
SORRY BUT IMMA HAVE TO KEEP MAKIN U LOOK DUM
Yo, my man, how bad do you want it?
You know how many cats I threw the pitch, and they never caught it?
I told them to bring they lyric, but they never brought it
Scared to get ripped off, cheated, deleted, rejected and shorted?
Yo, how bad do you want it?
Fear—I ain't got no time for it
If you want it, yo there's the track—put your rhyme on it!

how you spit 10 verses and dont have a real message
you aint making me look dumb you just making you a dunce
you couldnt make an artist Come/cum put this shit on beats everything goes numb
hit you with the Zulu nation contemplating now look at you come harder go further in the situation
what did you just prove
Nothing cuz everyone will just sit on you to shit on you
D-12
cant real write or spell
thats the white mans way of keeping you down shut up with that shit
times have changed old ma
NOTHING IS SEGREGATED

Verbal Architect aka VA wrote:

everything i spit is real to me you sitting here thinking its all good like im charlie in the factory
the shit is real
mad struggle real pain real hustle doing her thang to make away that the real hustle you wanna take it back take it back to KRS-1 him and Scott made it to the top from the shelter son
so that mean to me all im tryna do is eat instead of a old schooler really preaching you a New schooler hating
take it back to the lost boys that lost ones like Lauren and still kept pushing
and that what i do for my everyday strife
musically starving tryna provide
we all got it hard be some chose to make it some chose to say fuck
now Question
Which one is me
im bias cuz my life was always on a diet so i learn to do two things
live and die
hustle and strive so while you knock what you dont know there is another man dying
so whats the differenc in your or my judgement
the difference is you grew up in a time where there was fight and barely crime so look at it now
can you blame the youth for seeing the truth of real murders people that are homeless and always looking for foos to even get stamps you have to have an established home
so who you really preaching to Old Timer
im young and i know all the old tricks but when your given a reality wishes and dreams are just fantasy everyday dollar is the serve the fienes but in fact your hustling for more struggles man
you think before Obama really gave a fuck
we still appreciate but more should have been given to us
the rich get richer and the poor man suffer and got to follow rules that them niccas on the hill give us
so really what you think you tryna get through that it wont be ok in our harsh struggles
some live others just live
you think them peopl really give
its 2 sets us and them
i can preach back on a real journey and missins so watch what you say cuz you never no know who go through shit
im not knocking on your opinion really dude just look at the subscription
ive been given insight of my life my everyday vision
VA Verbal Architect stay well on top even if the world arouns her just drops

I AM OLD SKOOL
DATS Y MY NAME IS OLD TIMER

Open a de herb gate sellin pure ganja
babylon come but they undercova
they never really want me to stop sell ganja
But Im not having it I load the SLR
pack thje ganja BOOM they break down the door
ha ha 3 shots exchange at close range
out of 3 babylon hit one in the brain
ha ha 2 shots hit the window pane
I exchange 4 shots I drop and feel pain
but Im not hit, into the bathroom I crawl
I look out the window its a one storey fall
Im fallin, hit the ground and start crawlin
instead Im walkin round and blendin in wit the crowd
another day, I gotta way, I gotta fix this problem someday
but the very next day...

Verbal Architect aka VA wrote:

<quoted text>
how you spit 10 verses and dont have a real message
you aint making me look dumb you just making you a dunce
you couldnt make an artist Come/cum put this shit on beats everything goes numb
hit you with the Zulu nation contemplating now look at you come harder go further in the situation
what did you just prove
Nothing cuz everyone will just sit on you to shit on you
D-12
cant real write or spell
thats the white mans way of keeping you down shut up with that shit
times have changed old ma
NOTHING IS SEGREGATED

OOOH YEA DAT WAS A NICE DISS
NOT

You walk around the town like you a big man
But you never know now that there's always a bigger man
You sling the M 16 and flash the M 1
But you don't know what you're doing never learned to handle one
But true! All you friend thinking you a gangster
While your mother tried to warn you from certain danger
So when you in your room you playing with your Mac-10
Fully loaded automatic, just you and a friend
You posing aw dey mirror like you a gangster clown
But the Mac-10 go off and you friend go down

im bored

damn yo'l i knw dis late bt ur rhymes b sick @mad_mice n pac4life

Who killed hip hop ? was it me was it you?
Was it him was it her? or was it they whole crew?
Is it someone new or someone old school?
It doesn't 't even matter which one you go to -

The same answer is what they all told you
A big N-O - Nobody knows dude
So we roll through thinking its insane
Cuz Who in the world could've killed the game

Is it this effect or is it tpain
Is it Wayne or every rapper with LiL in their name
Is it Kanye with them stupid shades
Is it the wack cds? or the stupid dudes that paidd

Is it that chick thats shaking her ass
Or is it that dude making it rain with his cash
Is it the real dealers supplying the crack
Or is it the immitators who glorify it on tracks

Is it the real killer with a nine on they lap
Or is it the immitators who just rhyme about gats
Cuz even KRS-One was criminal minded
Untill his best friend got murdered by gun violence

I see these DJ's claiming that they down to rep
Then they fill up a mixtape with they're name and stupid sound effects
So Is it back packers and white rappers? NO
Its wack actors and The White Rapper Show

Was it the dudes with the chains or the minks
Or was it all the dudes dressing gay in pink
Its all those rappers spittin shyt thats bitten
those dudes kickin freestyles.......that are written

Cuz Hip hop ain't dead I'm proof that it is living
And if its gonna die ima be the one to kill it
So listen to what i said and kill it no longer
As I put a gun to its head .. then start my own genre.

ima go n play for heavy metal now. lol

METAPHOR wrote:

YO FOOLS WHY YOU PLAYIN
YOU DONT HAVE TO LISTEN IM JUST SAYIN
YOU RYMES IS WHACK
AND YO FOOLS ARE BETTER OFF SNIFFING CRACK
NOW I AINT THE BEST RAPPER ALIVE
BUT IM SURE AS HELL BETTER THAN THE JACKASON FIVE
SO ALL YOU ALL SHUT UP
CAUSE THIS WEBSITE IS GETTIN WORSE THAN TWO GIRLS ONE CUP

u just plain old SUCK

Come one

We represent G.O.D., Not P.O.P.
OLD TIMER you know me

You heard of me, all through Kreuzberg

With long and short verbs, words that exploit nerds

Then I'm soon gone, underground like a U-BahN

I'm a Temple members to the letter of U-1

Rewind, remix, replay, play

DJ capital M-E-T-A-P-H-O-R

You'll find the teacher OLD TIMER with Rene

Spittin words, verbs that manifest whole scenes

I mean whole dreams, takin it forward to microphone beam

with METAPHOR, Berlin got their own team

So take a mental pit stop, at the Temple of Hip Hop

These fools with jewels?Skip dat

And keep learning!.. Yeah, word, Boogie Down Berlin

Chozn 1 wrote:

Who killed hip hop ? was it me was it you?
Was it him was it her? or was it they whole crew?
Is it someone new or someone old school?
It doesn't 't even matter which one you go to -
The same answer is what they all told you
A big N-O - Nobody knows dude
So we roll through thinking its insane
Cuz Who in the world could've killed the game
Is it this effect or is it tpain
Is it Wayne or every rapper with LiL in their name
Is it Kanye with them stupid shades
Is it the wack cds? or the stupid dudes that paidd
Is it that chick thats shaking her ass
Or is it that dude making it rain with his cash
Is it the real dealers supplying the crack
Or is it the immitators who glorify it on tracks
Is it the real killer with a nine on they lap
Or is it the immitators who just rhyme about gats
Cuz even KRS-One was criminal minded
Untill his best friend got murdered by gun violence
I see these DJ's claiming that they down to rep
Then they fill up a mixtape with they're name and stupid sound effects
So Is it back packers and white rappers? NO
Its wack actors and The White Rapper Show
Was it the dudes with the chains or the minks
Or was it all the dudes dressing gay in pink
Its all those rappers spittin shyt thats bitten
those dudes kickin freestyles.......that are written
Cuz Hip hop ain't dead I'm proof that it is living
And if its gonna die ima be the one to kill it
So listen to what i said and kill it no longer
As I put a gun to its head .. then start my own genre.
ima go n play for heavy metal now. lol

UR NOT DA PROOF DAT HIP HOP IS STILL ALIVE

Criminal minded, this the jumpoff
My first one blast like you poppin that pumpoff
Yo CHOZN1, why these rappers so soft?
They corny ass raps be makin me doze off
You know I get the whole house open
Got the whole East, West, North, South open
I ain't jokin, you know how many times
I spit rhymes and left rappers wit they mouth open?
Y'all need to fall back
The 'hip-hop' you got in you NOW, I installed that
I spit a raw rap, peace and war rap
Ten more raps, where the tours at?
'Cause the world is soooooo hood, you must always be ready
...TO LET IT BLOOOOOOOW!!!
I'd rather talk about peeeeeeeace, but these rappers won't let me
SO HERE WE GOOOOOOOO!!!
I'd rather mind my business, but these rappers think
they Superbad, that's when they get smothered, chocked, and gagged
I just bought another Jag
'cause when I spit lyrics, I step-father like your other dad
I stay true
I'm a CHOZN1 and I'm VA
Hah! I train like CHOO-CHOO!
Y'all rappers rap crap, BULLSHIT DOO-DOO!!
Who knew?! I don't compare to you
Look at my nose, I even take in more air than you
I'm more aware than you and i spit it
I built this hip-hop matrix then programmed you IN IT!
I would tell you what's gon' happen this summer
But I'ma general, I don't talk to runners
Y'all just rappin and rappin shitty
So when you talk abotu battle, I get giddy

Yo
Where I come from gats bust for nothin'
Thugs, ministers, cops, teachers, all be hustlin'
Your family's the only one ya trustin'
Clubs be jumpin', redesigned cars be bumpin'
Now there's ranks supreme OLD TIMER is a free man
In Hip-Hop culture, I'm like Allen Greenspan
I tell the culture what's hot and what's not
Now look who's on top and look whose shit just dropped
We ain't about sellin' records, we ain't music merchants
We emcees we go straight to the club and hurt shit

Verbal Architect aka VA wrote:

wow kid real talk yo thats true i aint even gonna lie or front yo ive just been quiet

just tell him straight kick chuck313 and his lil buddy natedoog to the curb...because they aint rappers ive ripped on both of them 2 times and they just responded back with some wack dr seus rhymes.

SLUGGER wrote:

<quoted text>
just tell him straight kick chuck313 and his lil buddy natedoog to the curb...because they aint rappers ive ripped on both of them 2 times and they just responded back with some wack dr seus rhymes.

SHUT UP U HATER

Ill lead through and dominate this microphone I speak through
Im writing for the people, bite it if you need to
I can see through and see that, you saw an MC and tried to be that
That MC you saw was me can you believe that? And obey that?
True lyrics will always subvice and meaning rhymes equal actual life
Its the true essence in ebony, trace your record-sales G
Somethings are pure luck, other things are meant to be
I bet theyll mention me, in the next century:
OLD TIMER, innovator in early rap-poetry
Simultaniously you will be forgotten
While in the year 2000 Criminal Minded will still be rocking
You waste your time batteling me I got mine happening, see?
You should have thought G, a little bit sooner
Instead of batteling me you need your plan your long heavity
Before you die broke like Sammy Davis junior
The solar, followed by the looter, followed by the solar
Followed by McDonalds and Coca-Cola
The point is whatever the outcome of the battle
The day goes on with more french fries and soda
One, two and you dont quit, SLUGGER has got to be the real sure shit
One, two and you dont quit, OLD TIMER and yes we do it like this

Buckle up your seatbelt we about to get busy
Lyrics get thrown like a frisbee, who is he?
The K, you gets dizzy all for the roots like Kizzy
and SLUGGER in your city
Ask for Sensei not million more like teacher
Now youre familiar let me fill ya
Its like a jungle sometimes, it makes me rhyme
As were climbing up the speed, were finding what we need in the jungle
MCs stumble over their words and mumble over their verbs
Suddenly it occured: OLD TIMER, word!

i just wish this site would stop being such a groupie fest
none you all me professional rappers give it up already lol