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"Daddy it Hurts"

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RidgeRunner

Jasper, AL

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Nov 9, 2008
 

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"Daddy it Hurts"

My name is Chris

I am three,

My eyes are swollen

I cannot see,

I must be stupid

I must be bad,

What else could have made

My daddy so mad?

I wish I were better

I wish I weren't ugly,

Then maybe my mommy

Would still want to hug me.

I cant do a wrong

I cant speak at all

Or else im locked up

All day long.

When im awake im all alone

The house is dark

My folks aren't home

When my mommy does come home

I'll try and be nice,

So maybe ill just get

One whipping tonight.

I just heard a car

My daddy is back

From Charlies bar

I hear him curse

My name is called

I press myself

Against the wall

I try to hide

From his evil eyes

Im so afraid now

I'm starting to cry

He finds me weeping

Calls me ugly words,

He says its my fault

He suffers at work

He slaps and hits me

And yells at me more,

I finally get free

And run to the door

Hes already locked it

And I start to bawl,

He takes me and throws me

Against the hard wall

I fall to the floor

With my bones nearly broken,

And my daddy continues

With more bad words spoken,

"Im sorry!", I scream

But its now much to late

His face has been twisted

Into a unimaginable shape

The hurt and the pain

Again and again

O please God, have mercy!

O please let it end!

And he finally stops

And heads for the door

While I lay there motionless

Sprawled on the floor

My name is Chris

I am three,

Tonight my daddy

Murdered me

And you can help

Sickens me to the soul,

And if you read this

and don't pass it on

I pray for your forgivness

Because you would have to be

One heartless person

To not be affected

By this Poem

And because U R affected,

Do something about it!

So all i ask you to do

Is pass this on!

IF YOU ARE AGAINST CHILD ABUSE!

PLEASE COPY AND PASTE THIS AND PASS IT ON !!
REPOST THIS AS "Daddy it Hurts"
jerica

Saint Louis, MO

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#2
Dec 7, 2008
 
this made me cry
DADDY IT HURTS

West Covina, CA

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#3
Mar 17, 2009
 
Daddy it Hurts"
My name is Chris
I am three,
My eyes are swollen
I cannot see,
I must be stupid
I must be bad,
What else could have made
My daddy so mad?
I wish I were better
I wish I weren't ugly,
Then maybe my mommy
Would still want to hug me.
I cant do a wrong
I cant speak at all
Or else im locked up
All day long.
When im awake im all alone
The house is dark
My folks aren't home
When my mommy does come home
I'll try and be nice,
So maybe ill just get
One whipping tonight.
I just heard a car
My daddy is back
From Charlies bar
I hear him curse
My name is called
I press myself
Against the wall
I try to hide
From his evil eyes
Im so afraid now
I'm starting to cry
He finds me weeping
Calls me ugly words,
He says its my fault
He suffers at work
He slaps and hits me
And yells at me more,
I finally get free
And run to the door
Hes already locked it
And I start to bawl,
He takes me and throws me
Against the hard wall
I fall to the floor
With my bones nearly broken,
And my daddy continues
With more bad words spoken,
"Im sorry!", I scream
But its now much to late
His face has been twisted
Into a unimaginable shape
The hurt and the pain
Again and again
O please God, have mercy!
O please let it end!
And he finally stops
And heads for the door
While I lay there motionless
Sprawled on the floor
My name is Chris
I am three,
Tonight my daddy
Murdered me
And you can help
Sickens me to the soul,
And if you read this
and don't pass it on
I pray for your forgivness
Because you would have to be
One heartless person
To not be affected
By this Poem
And because U R affected,
Do something about it!
So all i ask you to do
Is pass this on!
IF YOU ARE AGAINST CHILD ABUSE!
PLEASE COPY AND PASTE THIS AND PASS IT ON !!
REPOST THIS AS "Daddy it Hurts"
arc angel

Nauvoo, AL

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#4
Mar 17, 2009
 
I read this to my 12 YEAR OLD...THEY DIDN'T UNDERSTAND ONLY ASKED QUESTIONS. THEY COULDN'T BELIEVE CHILDREN ARE TREATED THIS WAY EVERY MINUTE OF EVERY DAY
gl and kc
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#5
Mar 27, 2009
 
i don't like this. the dad makes me mad. why do ppl abuse children.
zoey

Everett, WA

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#6
May 5, 2009
 
Hi, does anyone know the author of this poem?
yep

New York, NY

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#7
Jul 24, 2009
 
It's a guy called Land Baron on the Monticello-ky thread as far as I know.
miranda graham

AOL

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#8
Nov 1, 2009
 
thats a sad thing. i hope that doesnt happen to anyone.
hannah

AOL

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Sunday Nov 29
 
miranda graham wrote:
thats a sad thing. i hope that doesnt happen to anyone.
I am sorry to break it to you but this happens every minute of every day.. It's happening right now..
Eugene
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Sunday Nov 29
 
ABOTION IS ONLY A COATHANGER AWAY.lol
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