Underneath a Broken Heart (fanfic)

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=Underneath a Broken Heart=
Chapter 5
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"Sean? What the heck are you doing with this girl?" I shouted at him. He stopped kissing her and looked up at me.
"Oh...um...hey Stephanie" he stuttered, his face red with embarrassment.
"Sean, who is she?" the blond girl asked confused. I felt sorry for her because she had no idea what a butthole she was kissing.
"I am his girl-...well ex girlfriend. Now who the heck are you?" I asked her, my voice filled with fury.
"Well I thought I was his girlfriend. My name is Katie" she said, obviously embarrassed and annoyed.
"Well, nice to meet you Katie. But I think that you need to leave" I glared at her.
"Steph, don't make her leave" Sean said.
"What? You are sticking up for her? I can't believe you!" I said. He stood up and walked towards me. I smelt beer in his breath.
"And I can't believe you! That is it. Move out" he scowled. What? If I moved out, I would have no home. And no money.
"What? You can't just kick me out! Besides, you were the one who was cheating on me! You know if you kick me out, I won't have anywhere to live!" I hissed at him. He rolled is eyes.
"You think I give a crap about you? Wow, you are pretty stupid. I want Katie instead of you. Now LEAVE!" he shouted at me. I felt tears form in my eyes, but I managed to hold them back. I glanced at Katie and she gave me a look as if to say 'sorry' but I still glared at her. I turned back to Sean.
"Fine. I don't wanna be with a pathetic butthole anyways. You and Katie can just get back to what you were doing." I said and then I turned to face Katie.
"Katie, I'm sorry that you got caught up in all of this. And I'm sorry that you are now dating a douchebag who is a butthole. I'm just warning you, leave while you can" I said. She looked at me and I could tell she was pondering every word I said. Good. Sean glared at me with narrowed eyes.
"Leave now, Stephanie. I hate you" he shouted.
"Ok I will leave. I love you too. And I wish the best for you and I hope you get a life and I hope that someday you will know how to treat a girl. And here is a tip on how to do that...stop being who you are now" I said, surprisingly calm. He was furious with me and no surprise, he smacked me across the face on the side that my mum had smacked me on. My cheek was throbbing and Katie gasped.
"Bye" I scoffed.
I walked out the bedroom door and slammed the door behind me. I grabbed what I had in my bag and looked to make sure everything was there...a pack of cigarettes, a lighter, a razor, a pocket knife, my phone,and some cash. But not much. I snuck into the kitchen and got a few bottles of beer. Tonight, I would probably camp out on the streets or something, and I would fall asleep in tears.
I walked out the door, and I couldn't take his truck. I just started walking aimlessly around, not knowing where to go. I walked and walked down the streets of the town. I looked enviously at the happy couples holding hands, at the loving mothers holding their child's hand, and at the happy people. I felt eyes staring at me and haunting me with their curiosity, but I tried to ignore them. I just kept walking. I got to a bus stop and soon, a bus was there. I got on and gave the driver some of my small amount of cash.
"Where does this bus go?" I asked him.
"Cheshire. Why is there somewhere specific you need to go?" he asked looking at my aweful appearance.
"Nope. I just need to go anywhere exept here." I said. He gave his head a nod and I sat down at the back of the bus.
Tears flooded my eyes and I made no attempt to hold them back...

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=Underneath a Broken Heart=
Chapter 5
==========
"Sean? What the heck are you doing with this girl?" I shouted at him. He stopped kissing her and looked up at me.
"Oh...um...hey Stephanie" he stuttered, his face red with embarrassment.
"Sean, who is she?" the blond girl asked confused. I felt sorry for her because she had no idea what a butthole she was kissing.
"I am his girl-...well ex girlfriend. Now who the heck are you?" I asked her, my voice filled with fury.
"Well I thought I was his girlfriend. My name is Katie" she said, obviously embarrassed and annoyed.
"Well, nice to meet you Katie. But I think that you need to leave" I glared at her.
"Steph, don't make her leave" Sean said.
"What? You are sticking up for her? I can't believe you!" I said. He stood up and walked towards me. I smelt beer in his breath.
"And I can't believe you! That is it. Move out" he scowled. What? If I moved out, I would have no home. And no money.
"What? You can't just kick me out! Besides, you were the one who was cheating on me! You know if you kick me out, I won't have anywhere to live!" I hissed at him. He rolled is eyes.
"You think I give a crap about you? Wow, you are pretty stupid. I want Katie instead of you. Now LEAVE!" he shouted at me. I felt tears form in my eyes, but I managed to hold them back. I glanced at Katie and she gave me a look as if to say 'sorry' but I still glared at her. I turned back to Sean.
"Fine. I don't wanna be with a pathetic butthole anyways. You and Katie can just get back to what you were doing." I said and then I turned to face Katie.
"Katie, I'm sorry that you got caught up in all of this. And I'm sorry that you are now dating a douchebag who is a butthole. I'm just warning you, leave while you can" I said. She looked at me and I could tell she was pondering every word I said. Good. Sean glared at me with narrowed eyes.
"Leave now, Stephanie. I hate you" he shouted.
"Ok I will leave. I love you too. And I wish the best for you and I hope you get a life and I hope that someday you will know how to treat a girl. And here is a tip on how to do that...stop being who you are now" I said, surprisingly calm. He was furious with me and no surprise, he smacked me across the face on the side that my mum had smacked me on. My cheek was throbbing and Katie gasped.
"Bye" I scoffed.
I walked out the bedroom door and slammed the door behind me. I grabbed what I had in my bag and looked to make sure everything was there...a pack of cigarettes, a lighter, a razor, a pocket knife, my phone,and some cash. But not much. I snuck into the kitchen and got a few bottles of beer. Tonight, I would probably camp out on the streets or something, and I would fall asleep in tears.
I walked out the door, and I couldn't take his truck. I just started walking aimlessly around, not knowing where to go. I walked and walked down the streets of the town. I looked enviously at the happy couples holding hands, at the loving mothers holding their child's hand, and at the happy people. I felt eyes staring at me and haunting me with their curiosity, but I tried to ignore them. I just kept walking. I got to a bus stop and soon, a bus was there. I got on and gave the driver some of my small amount of cash.
"Where does this bus go?" I asked him.
"Cheshire. Why is there somewhere specific you need to go?" he asked looking at my aweful appearance.
"Nope. I just need to go anywhere exept here." I said. He gave his head a nod and I sat down at the back of the bus.
Tears flooded my eyes and I made no attempt to hold them back...

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=Underneath a Broken Heart=
Chapter 6
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The bus drove on and on. It finally came to a hault and I got up and drug my feet along as I got to the front of the bus.
"Thanks" I said quickly to the driver.
"No problem" he said flashing me a smile. I got off of the bus and once again, started walking. I had no idea where I was headed. It was about 9:00 now, and it was kinda dark. I searched for any shelter. The night air was a little chilly. I put my hoodie on. I continued walking until finally I came to a huge building that looked like a stadium. I had no idea where I was at, but there was a lot of screams coming from inside of the building. My curiosity got the best of me, and I decided to go inside the building to see what the fuss was all about.
I opened the huge doors and saw many men standing at the entrance of the stadium. I walked up to them.
"Where are you going, Miss?" one asked me in a deep voice.
"Well, I was wondering what is going on in there? And why is there so much screaming? Are those people ok?" I asked, surprisingly concerned. I usually didn't care about anyone except myself. I felt that I was the only person I needed to care about. But right now, I was more curious then I was concerned.
They laughed at me.
"What's so funny?" I asked annoyed.
"Ma'am, One Direction is performing in there." they said. I had heard that name before...of course! Thee snob that I had talked to at the store! What was his name...Harry! That's it.
"Do you mind if I go in?" I asked, trying to be polite.
Once again,they laughed at me. I was upset.
"No, not unless you have 500 dollars for a ticket" they said. Dang. That was a lot of money. I would do anything for that kinda money. I just rolled my eyes and walked back out the door. I didn't have anywhere to go, but the building was pretty warm. I decided to go around the back of the building and stay there for the night. I leaned against the brick wall and slid down and just sat there. My stomach growled, but I stayed in place. I looked in my bag and pulled out the razor. I had been through so much today, and i just couldn't stand it. I held the razor against my wrist and sliced another cut upon the loathsome scars that were there. Blood trickled down my hand as tears slowly ran down my cheeks. I got out a bottle of beer and began drinking it. Then, I got out a cigarette and breathed in the damaging smoke. All of my emotional pain seemed to become physical pain, and I liked it better than emotional pain.
While I was sitting there, I heard a soft noise from the bushes across the concrete. I looked and I was curious about what the noise was. I walked over and saw what the noise was. It was a little baby kitten meowing. I looked around for it's mother, but couldn't find it. It was all alone and very young. It was black with white paws and a white chest and ears with white tips. It was quite adorable. I didn't love much things in my life, but one thing I did love was animals.
I picked up the meowing kitten, and brought it back over to where I was and sat down. I gently stroked it's fur as it purred softly.
"It's ok, little buddy. You can hang out with me" I whispered. It meowed a reply.
"I will call you..." I waited for what I was going to call this cat. I needed the perfect name for it. Then I had it.
"Hope. I will call you Hope" I said with a smile. It seemed satisfied with its name. I pulled Hope up closely to me and slowly drifted to sleep.
But I was soon awoken by someone tapping on my shoulder...

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