Niall Fan Fiction

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Meggz_softball99 wrote:

Hey could you guys check out my fan fic? It's called Niall Fan Fiction sry I accidentally named it the same as this one :/ but just look for my user name on it.... Thanks!

It's really good!!! Hannah was such a skunkbag but now she's nice write more!!!

who="jes_is_phenomiNIALL "]My heart dropped all the way to the ground, the birds that were in my stomach this morning came back, but this time they were bigger, madder, they were angry crows chewing on me from the inside out. I.was.scared.
"What -a are - He must've decided i was taknig to long because he budded in
"we have to leave, now. I'm sorry Jes but i dont think this guys very nice."
All i could do was nod my head. He put his arm around my waist and started leading me to the limo.
"What about the b b boys?" i finally managed to say
"I will text them." He took his phone out of his back pocket and sent a couple texts.When he was finished he put it in his hoodie pocket and grabbed my hand We started towards the limo again.
"you'll be ok, we will get you home safe." He said it almost like he was trying to make himself believe it, which only scared me more.
"i promise" he added
"i trust you" i said and i did i knew he'd do anything to get me home safe.
We finally got into the limo and sat down on the comfy couches inside. At first Niall was sitting next to me on the couch but then he moved closer, closing the gap. He put his arm around me and whispered in my ear
"I dont want you to leave"
i smiled and whisperd back "I dont want you to leave me either" He looked at me with those beautiful blue eyes and kissed me. it completly shocked me, i was frozen, stuck in time. Louis happened to open the door at the exact same second and yelled "OH MY GOSH!! NIALL YOUR INFECTED!! GIRLL COOTTIIIEEESSS!!!!!" Niall pulleed way and whispered in my ear
"I think hes jealous" I laughed and Louis must've heard because he just looked at me and said " i dont even remember if she likes carrots."
He was obviously not amused,he sat down just as all the rest of the boys piled in. I could't let him drop me off and leave me, it wouldn't work, i'd cripple up on the floor and lay there until someone made me move. I'd lay there untill he came back for me. I had to convince my mom to let me stay with him, the only question was how..
4 commets and ill write another!!:)

Write more! I LOVE IT!

I plan on writing more right after i eat lunch!!!

Really good

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sorry guys! im having some troubles writing! I should be done soon though!!

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Hurry please!!! I'm addicted!!!!:)

We were almost home when Niall whispered in my ear
"I'm not leaving unless you're coming with me." he said it like how he promised me earlier today. I had to believe him, i turned and curled up to him. "I have no idea how i'm going to convince her to let me come with you" I knew deep down i could make her i just didn't know how.
"Which house is it?" the limo driver asked me "The white one on the hill" i replied
I knew i'd have to get time to talk to her alone.
"Niall do you think you guys could spend the night?"
"Maybe, i'd have to call my manager, but i can ask, why?"
"because i'd have a better chance of coming with you if i had time to talk to her alone."
We pulled into the drive way and i could see my mom looking out the front door. Niall must've seen her too because he said "Well lets go!"
We got out and Louis was the first to the door my mom opened it and saw me coming up the steps (shes not the biggest fan of One direction)
"Hi honey! how was your day?"
"umm, great mom."
"You sound out of it hun, whats wrong?"
"Well me and Niall have to talk to you about something" i told her shyly
"sure what is it?" she said suddenly getting curious
"Well, i was wondering if I could travel with them for the rest of the summer, ya know on like tour and stuff."
"Jes! are you out of your mind? you cant just go off with a boy for the summer!!"
"Umm, sorry to interrupt but everyone on our part says its ok we just need your permission." Niall added even though he hasn't told anyone yet.
"and im not running off with a boy, im gonna hang out with them for the summer. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!" i begged
"Jes, i don't know can i have some time to think about it?
" Well, not really we have to leave by tomorrow."
Well then, Jes I just...
"We can spend the night if we have to" Niall said cutting my mom off
"well i guess you can spend the night so i can think about it, but Jes dont get your hopes up."
She was thinking about it! it was already going better than i thought!!
'thank you so much mom!!" i ran over to her and gave her a big bear hug!
We all went down stairs to settle in it was only 7:30 but we decided to watch a movie.
Me, Niall, and Harry sat on the old fashioned over sized couch across the room from the tv.
Louis found the recliner that spins and decided that would be the best spot for him.
Zayn and Liam sat on the other couch closest to the tv.
It was still light in the basement because the sun was still shining through the glass patio door and the two windows side by side.
We found the movie Finding Nemo and decided to watch that. We were at the part where Nemo is being flushed down the toilet when my mom came down stairs she said "Jes, I've reached a decision...

4 comments and ill write more!!!:)

So good

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PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!

Ill hopefully write when i get back from horse riding!! Gonna be there for about 2 and a half hours, ill try and get another posted tanite!

plzzzzzzzz YOUR STORIES ARE SOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!

Yea they r!!!

I love it!! Write more!! And have fun at horseback riding!!

this is good!

Im gonna start writin in about 5 minutes!!

Oh my gawd! I am having COMPLETE writers block!! Sorry guys, it might be a little longer untill i post another.:(