Louis Tomlinson Fanfic

Nialls POV
I was having dinner with my beautiful date Kayla. I love her so much so I looked at her and said " Michaela Ann, I Niall Horan love u so very much and would be lost with out u. Will u please take this promise ring?"
"yes Niall I love you too"
I got up and gave her a big hug. Our date continued and it ended at nine so I asked her to say with me for the night. She said that she would so her and I went back to my house she told me "Niall I'm gonna sleep on the couch"
"no u can sleep in my room if u would like"
"sure" her and I went up to my room and she fell asleep with her head on my chest

Liam's POV
I got a text from Brittney.(text conversation)
Brittney: hey
Liam: hi
Brittney: can we talk?
Liam: we r talking
Brittney: I mean in person
Liam: well I don't know isn't Zayn with u
Brittney:no he is in his room sleeping he sleeps in his room and I sleep in my room
Liam: well I don't want Zayn to get anymore pissed at me so I don't think I can
Brittney: he wants to thank u so please come over here
Liam: fine I'll be right over
Brittney: see u soon
(end of conversation)
I walked in her room and said "what?"
"sit down please?"
"sure"
"I wanted to give u something but Zayn can't know about it"
"let me guess if he finds out he will be hurt?"
"yes but Liam I need to give u this"
"then give it to me and Zayn won't find out"
She leaned in and gave me a kiss. I kissed her back but I then pulled away and said "ok I can't do this and neither can u"
"I know I'm so sorry"
"don't be sorry I loved what u gave me but it's not right. At night I can't just come in here and let u kiss me when during the day ur kissing Zayn"
"I know I don't know what's going on with me. I love Zayn but I love u to. This is wrong" she frowned
"Brittney we need to go to bed. Goodnight."
"goodnight Liam"

Amazayn!:)

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Zayns POV
I heard voices coming from Brittneys room but I didn't worry about it I knew she loved me so I didn't do anything about it. A few hours later I heard a scream coming from Brittneys room. I knew it was Brittney so I ran into her room she was crying nd screaming. I tryed to wake her up it took me 10 minutes to wake her up. When she finally woke up she was crying so hard. I was looking at her and asked her what her nightmare was about she said "at first it wasn't a nightmare but it was u and I on a date at a restaurant and this guy came up and took our order but when we finished we waited for the check. He finally came and gave us the check. He also had a gun. I started crying and u took my hand but the guy shot u in the shoulder"
"Brittney that's never going to happen. Do u want to stay with me tonight?"
"yes please" I picked her up and carried her to my room she wouldn't let me put her down so when I went to get in bed I had to hold her hand she was that scared.
I finally asked her "Brittney I heard voiced coming from ur room earlier. Who was with u?"
"oh umm don't get mad but it was Liam"
"oh ok." I was kinda confused at y he was with him but I let it go and she fell asleep and wouldn't let go of my arm. She looked beautiful when she slepted.
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Zayns POV
When I woke up Brittney was still there holding on to my arm she was crying again but she wasn't awake I woke her up and pulled her to me and would let her go until she stopped crying I said "Brittney what was this nightmare about?"
"it was about losing u and Liam"
"u were dreaming about Liam. Oh yeah I forgot u still love him. Or at least it sounded like it when u were talking in ur sleep last night"
"Zayn what was I saying?"
"u were saying Liam I love u that's y I stayed not because of Zayn. Liam I love u Liam I love u Liam I love u LIAM. U kept on screaming his name then u stopped. Is Liam really the reason u stayed?"
She didn't answer she just got up and left.

Brittney POV
Was Zayn really saying that. But maybe I did stay because of Liam. Idk I love Zayn and Liam. Maybe I love Liam more. I needed to talk to someone. So I went to talk to Louis I nocked on his door and he came and opened it he looked hurt when he saw me then he let me in. I asked "what's with the hurt? Do u hate me now?"
"Brittney of course I don't hate u. I hate myself not u"
"Lou why do u hate yourself?"
"for kissing u at the hospital and for lying to Zayn on y I did it"
"y did u kiss me and dont lie to me please?"
"because I hate the way that Zayn treats u and because I want u to be with me and not Liam or Zayn. Zayn treats u like a piece of meat. Last night when u were sleeping he came in here and told me that u would be better of without him and that he was gonna break up with u in the morning and that he wished u never came along"
"I'll be back Lou"
"ok come back soon love"
I smiled and went to Zayns room and nicked and he came and got it I slapped him and said "were done"
He looked at me and said "finally I was gonna break up with u this morning. Urs lying b****"
I left and went back to Lous with tears in my eyes he grabbed me and pulled me to him and ontop of his lap and let me cry. He asked me what I did I told him "I made it easier for Zayn. I broke up ith him and he called me a lying b****"
"what have u lied about?"
"Lou can we not talk about this please"
"sure I'll go make food"
I got up and Lou took my hand and took me down stairs and he started cooking

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louis pov
i was making food when i realized brittney got up and came over to me. i noticed she was there when she put her hand on my shoulder she said "Lou calm down"
"how am i suposed to be calm? u and Zayn broke up because of me"
"Lou thats not ur falt and u know it just calm down, please Lou calm down."
i calmed down a little bit but then zayn came out of his room and punched me. i heard brittney yell "zayn stop it" Zayn yelled back "y should I. ur just gonna date Lou since we broke up."
everyone woke up because of Zayn. they all came out and saw everything i was laying on the floor when brittney steped in Zayns way so he couldnt hit me again. i was greatful for her she just saved my life because the way Zayns eyes looked he would of killed me on the spot. Zayn walked away when Brittney steped in the way he said when he was walking away "have fun with ur new boyfriend Brittney". Harry ran up to me saying "boobear r u alreight?" i didnt say anything i was looking at Brittney she was crying. Liam went running to her and hugged her and asked "New boyfriend?" she just replied "I dont have a boyfriend i broke up with Zayn this morning and he thought that Lou and i started dating. we didnt though." she was crying i tried to get up but i couldnt. i was in pain i looked at harry and said get me to the hospital." brittney looked down at me and came to my side she asked "Lou r u ok? im so sorry for that Lou"
"brittney im ok dont worry about it im fine just get me to the hospital. dont be sorry for anything, i was the one that kissed u the other day and i was the one that told u what i did. im sorry Brittney"
she yelled "Lou dont talk like that im glad u told me, lou ur gonna be alright." she started crying again and i wiped her tears away i said "Liam can u take her to ur room please she doesnt need to see this" i kissed her cheek before Liam took her to his room. he picked her up and took her she was crying in his chest and i was thinking i wish that was me carrying her. i think i love her no i cant if i love her then she would get hurt even more then what she is. i didnt want her to get hurt plus i was with Emily i cant cheat on Emily im not a cheater i cant do that to anyone.
harry called an ambulance and 5 minutes later they got here. they took me to the hospital.

Liams Pov
i was with Brittney in my room when i got a call on my phone it was a girl i met awhile back her name was Lauren. her and i were best friends. i didnt answer the call but i got a text from her saying (text conversation -LP=Liam Payne -L=Lauren)
L- whats going on u always anwser my calls?
LP-sorry im trying to chear someone up
L-oh ok do u need any help?
LP-sure u can help
L-ok ill be right over
LP-ok. when u get here just come right up to my room
L-ok i will, see u soon
LP-ok see u soon
(end of convorsation)
i was looking at Brittney. she looked up at me and started crying again. i leaned down and kissed her i couldnt help it. i pulled away and whispered in her ear "Brittney i think u and Lou should be together"
she looked at me hurt she just said "i love you Liam and i want to be with u. ur the reason i stayed it wasnt because of Zayn it was because of u. i love you Liam"
"ull find someone better then me"
"liam i dont want anyone better then u i want u. kayla told me that u and i r perfect together she said that u look at me the way that niall looks at her and that i look at u the same way"
"Brittney i cant and u know it. i can see that u love Lou and he loves u. please dont make this any harder on me please Brittney"
she didnt say anything she got up and left my room. i looked at where she was going, she was heading to Niall and Kaylas room. she nocked on the door and Niall yelled "come in" she went in.

Nialls POV
someone nocked on the door so i yelled "come in" and Brittney walked in i was just in my boxers but i didnt care its not the first time she saw me wearing just my boxers. Kayla was in the room with me she got up and ran to Brittney, Kayla gave Brittney a big hug. brittney burst in to tears so i went to her and picked her up and took her to the bed and sat her down she just sat there crying in to her hands Kayla was on one side and i was on the other side. Kayla was trying to get Brittney to stop crying. i thought maybe tickiling would work so i start tickiling her she stoped crying and she started laughing. i didnt stop tickiling her i picked her up and put her on my lap and tickiled her more she didnt stop laughing Kayla looked mad because Brittney was in my lap but she smiled at me. Liam walked in and Brittney stoped laughing she just bursted down in tears at the sight of Liam. i knew he did something so i layed Brittney down on the bed and went to Liam and asked "what did u do to Brittney?"
"she told me she loves me and i tolded her that she is better of with Lou. i know i messed up i just dont want her to get hurt by me the way she got hurt by Zayn. she is better of with Lou though. lou loves her and i can tell she loves him."
"Liam u messed up big time dont tell a girl who she loves go talk to her'
"thanks Niall"
"dont hurt her again"
"i have to"
"what do u mean u have to hurt her again"
"well i have been secretly dating Lauren for about 2 days"
"dude u could of told Brittney that instead of leading her on"
Lauren heared what i just said and she came in and asked "what? u have been dating me and u have been leading on a tramp named Brittney"
Niall said "Brittney is not a tramp but i cant say the same about u"
Liam looked at me and said "wow Niall way to show ur suport"
Lauren "im not a tramp Brittney is she loved Louis then she dated Liam then she dated Zayn now her and Zayn broke up and she went for Lou and now shes going after Liam. so yeah shes a tramp.
Brittney got off of my bed and slapped Lauren and said "dont ever call me a Tramp again. Liam im leaving tell Lou im sorry" she walked out the door and Liam followed.
Brittneys POV
Liam was behind me so i said "Liam what do u want let me guess u want to call me a tramp to"
"no Brittney i dont im sorry i didnt know she would say that. please dont leave"
"y shouldnt i?"
"because Lou is here and so is Niall and Kayla and Harry"
"well there not u. i have to leave. Zayn called me a B**** this morning so im leaving Bye."

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OMG such a good story! I'm so addicted to it!

Uhhh i would never say that in real life but keep going its great

Please write more

should i continue?

Yes keep going its great, AMAZAYN I love it xxx keep writing please?

PLEASE CONTINUE!:) pretty pretty please?

I love your stories please put me in there my name is izzy and I LOVE LOUIS TO DEATH

Continue!!! & btw when am I going2 b in it?:(

MIRELA LUVS LOUIS wrote:

Continue!!! & btw when am I going2 b in it?:(

what part were you supposed to have. I forgot

BrittneyAnn wrote:

<quoted text> what part were you supposed to have. I forgot

Harry's gf......I have long, brown hair & brown eyes.......& I'm really funny& sweet:)

MIRELA LUVS LOUIS wrote:

<quoted text>Harry's gf......I have long, brown hair & brown eyes.......& I'm really funny& sweet:)

Ok you'll be in this next part