It's Gotta Be You fanfic

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Chapter 18
Ashley's P.O.V.
We were all ready to get on the plane. So we got on and we were off to Poland. I noticed that Louis looked very scared of seeing Derek. "hey Louis r u okay?" I asked. "not really. I'm scared." he said worriedly. Dominika was sitting next to him asleep. The only people that were awake were me, Louis, Brayden, and Harry. "hey Lou. Can u pass me a magazine?" Brayden asked. Louis tossed her a bunch and she started to read them. Harry was trying to fall asleep and I was reading a book. "hey Ashley I can't sleep." Harry said. "jut try cuz I'm going to sleep now." I said and shut my eyes.
Harry's P.O.V.
Everyone was asleep except for me and Lou. "Lou, r u awake?" I whispered. "yeah. But I mite try to sleep." he said ad I saw him close his eyes. I soon fell asleep too... It was the morning and I looked out the window to see land. "did we land already?" I asked Liam. "no. We're just close to the ground." he said and yawned. Everyone was now awake and I saw Dominika so happy. "what's up with Pep?" I asked. "who's Pep?" Maria asked. "that Harry's nickname for Dominika since that she's always Peppy." Zayn said. "Harry! I don't like being called stupid nicknames. And I'm happy cu underneath us is Poland." Dominika said. After a while we landed and got to the apartment where we were staying. "wow. This place looks nice." Niall asked. "I know. This whole country probably looks nice." Louis said and smiled. "where r we anyway?" Paul asked. "we are in Augustów Poland!" Dominika said happily. "we have to get ready the wedding is soon." Brittany informed us. So we did. And sooner than usuall we were at the church getting ready for the wedding to begin.

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Chapter 19: The Wedding and party
Derek's P.O.V.
I was so happy to see Dominika, her friends, Paul, the lads, and my parents sitting in the 2 front rows. When I saw Monica walk down the aisle, I was astonished. She looked so beautiful in that dress. "Do u Derek Kaczynski, take Monica Richards to be wife?" the pastor asked. "I do." I said and smiled. "do you Monica Rochards, take Derek Kaczynski to be ur husband?" the pastor asked again. "I do." she said. "by the power vested in me, you may now kiss the bride." he said and took a step back. We had our kiss. After the wedding we got in the limo and we made it to the party. I saw Dominika and her gang come up and they hugged us. "congrats Derek and Monica!" Dominika said happily. "thanks Dominika it means a lot that all of u came." Monica said. I looked over and saw Louis standing there awkwardly. "Louis can I talk to u?" I asked. He nodded and we walked away. "um.. Louis I'm sorry about what happened back at the house. And I'm allowing u to date my sis again." I said. "thanks Derek and sorry I caused this problem." he said. "it's fine Lou. Now its time to party!" I said happily. We have each other a bro hug and we walked back. "Derek! I'm so happy for you!" my mom and dad both screamed. My mom was tearing and my dad was about to cry. "and I know that John would be so proud to see u all grown up." my mom said while crying. I was sad at the thought but me and Monica had to walk around and talk to everyone.
My P.O.V.
We were all sitting around kind of bored. "well now what?" Brayden asked. "idk." Harry said and shrugged. Louis told me about him and Derek and I was so happy. They put on "Look After You" by The Fray and Louis took my hand. We started slow dancing. While we were dancing Louis was singing the words softly. I looked around and saw the others dancing too. I smiled and looked up At Louis. "I wish that can be us one day." I whispered. "yeah. That would be nice." he said and kisse my forehead. The rest of the party went well and soon, it was time for u to leave.

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Chapter 20:Our Day in Poland
Ashley's P.O.V.
We woke up and Dominika was watching tv. "u understand this stuff?" Harry asked. "yeah. Im actually amazed." she said. I walked over to Harry to see him on his phone. "what r u doing on at 7 in the morning?" I asked. "well in America it's 2 in the afternoon." he said and smiled. Everyone else woke up and we decided to head out. "so where r we going?" Niall asked. "um.. I don't understand the map." Paul said and tried flipping it around. "uncle Paul don't worry. I know this place by heart." Dominika said and pointed to a food place. "yay food!" we all screamed at once. "Dominika, can u order for us?" Louis asked. "sure. Proszę pani, my jusz jesteśmy gotowi.(excuse me miss. We r ready.)" she said. To us it sounded like two aliens talking. "okay przepraszam. Co wy chcecie?(okay sorry. What would u like?)" the person asked. Dominika ordered the food and we all ate. Then we paid and left.
Louis's P.O.V.
We were walking around when I noticed that there were a bunch of people here. I wonder why? "Dominika y r there so many people?" I asked. "oh well apparently there's a concert today here. It's actually a lot of fun." she said and smiled. We kept walking and we decided to stop for a little bit. "is there such things as taxis?" Harry whined. "yeah but u can't drive here. U can only ride bikes." Brayden said. We all walked to the apartment and we got on our plane ready to head home.

Sorry about like the random stuff In between the words. I had no idea that was gonna happen

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Chapter 21
It has been a couple months and everyone is used I each other. Including Derek and Louis.
Paul's P.O.V.
I woke up and noticed that there was a present on the table. I opened it and saw that it was from my step sister or Dominikas mom. It had a letter that said: Thank u so much for taking care of the girls. All us moms and dads greatly appreciate it. I smiled and I saw that the present was a gold chain. "hey what's wrong with Maria?" Zayn asked. "oh well her dad is in the hospital. He's sick." Brittany said sadly. I walked into the living room to see everyone talking. "u heard the news?" I asked. They all nodded and we heard Maria crying from the bathroom. "poor girl. She doesn't deserve this." Dominika said glumly. "maria, r u okay?" Louis asked. "no!" she screamed. We all sat there and waited for her to come out. She finally came out and all her mascara was running down her cheeks. "is it bad? Like will he survive?" Brayden asked scaredly. "I hope. I can't live without him." she said and sat next to Zayn.
My P.O.V.
I felt really bad for Maria. I bet everyone was. "do u wanna go do something to get ur mind off it?" Ashley asked. "no. I'll be fine." Maria said. She walked up to her room and Zayn followed.*sigh* "now what?" Paul asked. "I have no idea. We just have to wait I guess." Niall said and Liam went to the kitchen. "hey guys look!" Liam screamed from the kitchen. We all walked over and saw a note. It said: Dominika if u r reading this, I wanted to let u know that ur cousin is officially dead. From: U.S. ARMY Sargent Smith. "wtf?" Louis asked. "what... He can't be... That's not possible!" I screamed. "wait what's going on?" Paul asked. "my cousin Andrew went into the army and he got shot near his heart and now he's dead." I said trying not to cry. "wow. 2 bad things happening to 2 innocent girls in one day." Harry said. I ran to my room and slammed the door shut. I couldn't take it anymore!! So I went outside and walked around until...

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Chapter 22
My P.O.V.
I went outside and walked around until I was hit. I don't know by what but I was hit by something hard. The last thing I heard was Louis scream and then everything turned black... I woke up in a hospital bed and everyone was crowding around me. "what happened?" I asked. I felt all dizzy. "u got hit... By a car.. And it was all my fault." this girl said holding back her tears. "Maria it wasnt ur fault." Her friend said. "oh well okay. But who r u people?" I asked confused. The doctor walked in. "doc, y doesn't she remember anyone?" this older looking guy asked with a serious tone. "she has a little bit of memory loss but it's okay it'll get better. It might take a couple of days though I hope." he said. "U HOPE!! U CANT HOPE U GOTTA KNOW!!" this brown haired boy screamed loudly. "I'm sorry." the doctor said and left the room. "I'm ur uncle Paul. And those are ur friends Maria, Brayden, Ashley, and Brittany. And these young lads are Liam, Niall, Zayn, Harry, and Louis." Paul said and piointed to everyone of them. "oh. Okay." I said. Everyone had to leave but Louis stayed. "babe r u okay?" he asked. "y r u calling me babe? We just met." I asked. "well before this accident happened, we were dating." he said and showed me a picture on his phone of us playing soccer at the park. "I don't remember anything about me dating someone." I said.
Louis's P.O.V.
I couldnt believe she doesn't remember about our relationship. "was our relationship a happy one?" she asked me curiously. "yes it was. It was very happy. We loved each other so much. But now it's gone." I said and I felt a tear roll down my cheek. "I gotta go Dominika. Bye." I said. "wait! Can u plz sleep here with me?" she asked. "sure I guess." I said. "Louis how long were we dating for?" she asked me. "a couple of months." I said. "well Louis goodnight." she said and fell asleep. I tried to but I couldn't. I had too many thoughts on my mind. Like what of she doesn't get better? Or what of she doesnt love me after she gets better? I was super worried and I hope it'll get better tommorow.

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Chapter 23
Louis's P.O.V.
Apparently I was able to actually sleep last night cuz I woke up in a chair next to the hospital bed. I quietly stood up and before I left I kissed Dominikas forehead. I drove home. When I got there, everyone but Liam was still asleep. "hey. Is she okay?" he asked me with a look of concern. "idk man. She doesn't remember anything about us." I said sadly. "let's just hope it gets better." he said and sighed. "well Liam when I was at the hospital last night I thought what if she doesn't get better? Or what if she doesn't love me after?" I asked. "well we just have to see but don't worry Lou everything will be fine I promise. He said. We hugged quickly and went to wake everyone else up. "WAKE UP!!" me and Liam both screamed. They all jumped out of bed an walked downstairs. "is Dominika feeling better Lou?" Paul asked. "idk." I said and sat down. I really wasn't in the mood to do anything. "so what r we gonna do today?" Ashley asked. "um.. Let's go get some breakfast first and then we'll think about it." Niall said. So we went to Starbucks really quick and got some food. "guys I'm not in the mood to do anything." I said glumly. "come on Louis. Don't be a Debbie downer." Zayn said and punched my arm lightly. "idk guys. I just can't think straight." I said and finished my coffee. "well were going to the park so come whenever u can." Brittany said and they left. Only me and Paul were left. "I'm going home." I said. "no wait. I'll bring u to the hospital. She should be awake." Paul said and we drove there. When we got to the room she was awake. "hey uh... Paul? And... Louis?" she said. "yep. U got it." Paul said happily. "so how r u doing?" I asked. "good. Just in a little pain. Where is everyone else?" she asked in a confused tone. "they went to the park." Paul said annoyingly. I knew he hated it how they ditched us like that. I looked over to her and saw...

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Chapter 23 Part 2
Louis's P.O.V.
I saw tht she wasn't looking well. She was very pale so I called a doctor in. "what's wrong with her doc?" I asked. "well her brain seems to be having some problems." he said in a serious tone. I told Paul to call the lads and tell them to come with the girls. "so what r u gonna do?" I asked. "were gonna have to have an MRI on her brain." he said. "r those serious doc?" Paul asked. "in some cases yes. Let's just see if she's one of this cases. U r gonna have to leave while me make the X-ray. We'll call u in after." he said and we both walked out. Paul had tears in him eyes. The rest of the group got here and sat down next to us. "how is she?" Ashley asked. "she needs to get an MRI done cuz there's something wrong with her brain. She was dangerously pale." Paul said. "u can come in." the nurse said. So we walked into the room to see her still pale. "she looks terrible!" Harry screamed. "shhh. U must be quiet." the doc whispered. "is she okay?" Brayden asked. "listen she's no gonna be one of those cases. But we need permission by her legal guardian." the doc said. "I'm her guardian for now. Her parents are in America." Paul said. They gave him a clipboard and a pen and told him to fill it out. So he did. They got her set up for the MRI. I couldn't watch. "okay. We advise u to leave." the nurse said and pushed us out. Paul was the only one allowed in there. I sat down and started to cry. "it's not ur fault Louis." Maria said. "ik but I just can't believe this." I said. "well I know that she's strong and that she'll survive it." Brittany said. So we say there and waited. They finally called us in. "she's okay. Don't worry. She has her memory back also." the doc screamed. We all ran up to Dominika. "ur okay! Thank god!" I screamed and hugged her. "but cuz of the crash she's gonna need this." the doc said and hel up a sling. "u got me going scared for a little bit doc." Niall said and we all laughed. The nurse put the sling on Dominika and they left the room. "I'm so happy ur okay." Paul said and hugged her extra tight. "Lou how did u survive without me home?" she asked. "well it was hard for him at first but we helped him." Zayn said. I starte to blush but she was laughing. She sat up and gave me a quick kiss. "get a room!" Liam yelled. "Liam shut up!" Dominika screamed and kissed me again. We all started to laugh. I was so happy that everything was back to normal.