Girl Next Door (Fanfic)

Zerox1015 wrote:

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I think I'm the 1,000th comment?
If yes than HOLY DIRECTION EMMA YOU HAVE 1,000 COMMENTS!

Lol wait its not :(
I'm feel stupid now >.<

Zerox1015 wrote:

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Lol wait its not :(
I'm feel stupid now >.<

*Erica

Erica loves Louis wrote:

Okay I want to thank all these amaZayn ppl for reading my fanfic! It means a lot to me :)
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Everyone else who reads this fanfic! I appreciate everyone taking the time to read this. <3 u guys!

Oh no problem! It's really good by the way!

Keep going its soooooo good
:)

"What do you mean I can't go!" I scream at the top of my lungs. Hot tears stream down my face and my bottom lip quivers.
"You aren't old enough!" my dad shouts back "And you have school!"
"But the boys could tutor me. Harry's in my year and we could share a tutor." I say
"No, your not going!" 
"But dad-"
"IM NOT LOOSING YOU AFTER I JUST LOST YOUR MOTHER!" he shouts. He lowers his and shakes it. He didn't me to see him cry. I walk up to him and give him a hug.
"Dad I'll be fine. I'll Skype you everyday! I promise I will be fine." I whisper. He nods
"I know... I just look at you like ur still my little girl." he sniffles. 
"I know... But I'm not a little girl anymore."
"Are you sure you want to go?"
"Yes."
A few hours later at the airport
"I can do it. I don't want to go!" I cry. I know I'm making a scene and embarrassing the guys (partially for wrecking homecoming) and also cause I can't leave my friends.
"Erica look!" Louis says taking my face into his hands. I look into his heart stopping blue eyes. "The hardest part is letting go." he says kissing me softly. I nod. 
"just let go..." I whisper to myself. I take Louis hand and we board the plane.

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Really good!!!

Aaawwwww! Adorable! Keep going!

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:D happy you guys like it

Erica loves Louis wrote:

:D happy you guys like it

I like your style. ;)

Erica loves Louis wrote:

Okay do I have no school tomorrow (teacher workday or something) so I will write a bunch tonight(hopefully! Gonna watch avengers) and tomorrow for sure!

ugh i'm jealous…i love that movie…

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Love it so much! Ur really talented :)

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This is extrodharry

It's really good keep writing

aww.. this was so sweet!! im so glad ur continuing it:)

Aw I love it!! And always have and all ways will!:)